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| "Fushigi Souden - the Seigyuu Saga" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Aho On: April 15, 2007 01:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hi, Twin-san! XD Hm..I liked it :3 Since I'm a nerd, I enjoyed it for the RP value... 8D I hope you continue it, I'm interested to see if you'll throw in the other two seishi ;3 I liked how you wrote their personalities, they're quite defining. :3 Only criticism I really have is that some of the sentences are a bit choppy; try to make it flow better, maybe? But the grammar was spot on, and the vocabulary was a nice touch as well x3 Good job!
| Title: First review! Wh00t!
Reviewed By: Shinsetsu-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2006 00:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this fic so far! The only things I see wrong with it is that Majesty was misspelled a bit, and they have emporers and empresses instead of kings and queens in that era, no da. ^^ And Shuka's seishi name confuses me. The other seishi are named after their constolation, not their character. Granted, I know that there aren't anymore names to have, but it was just a thought. -^^- Hope to see another chapter! I'm fond of this God already! xD
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