| "Iridescent Fates" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Title: verbal daieah an bad thing?
Reviewed By: inuyasha_lover666 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2007 02:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! like i cant even being to describe how much i love this story but i'll try and get over my verbal daireah and tell you that this is the BEST story i have ever read i love how you are doing a story where the plot is shuichi wants to get into a play for moulin rouge yet you take elements from the moulin rouge movie and apply them to the actual lives the characters lead in your story i must say that you my dear are a very talented writer not only is moulin rouge the most amazing love story ever but it is my favourite movie as well and same with gravitation lol my fav anime :P but i love how in chapter 8 you gave hints to some things from the movie .. well at least i thought they were hints lol i imagine that the dress shuichi was wearing for the photoshoot was satin's "smoldering temptress" dress and that the picture used was the one that is on the cover of the dvd and to me i feel that thoma is mr harold zeedler and that possibly ryuchi could be the duke and hiro and tatsuha are the ever loving underworld bohemians i just cant get over how you can take one topic and apply it to everythign withing this story and make it work also with random smut thrown in for good measure which in chapter eight i enjoyed how yuki was dubbed the submissive one when he asked shuichi to "make him happy" yet he still held that air of being the dominant one i feel that in that scene both him and shu were equal they were both dominant/submissive which worked well and much better than the usual stories i read where shuichi is the begging little whiney girl nd yuki is the big man whos there just to give it to him lol i possibly should think about ending this some times soon for i think i am running out of words in the dictionary for this but please please dont abandon this story i have been here from the beginning and i very rarely review since i dont like it that much but i feel the stories that deserve a review deserve my praise so i'm hoping to see more future updates take as long as you like on updating but i would be heart broken to hear you abandon this story without the ending this one is promising also i'm hoping that in the end shuichi wont die that would also break my heart cause i cry everytime at the end of moulin rouge and ive seen it numorous times just seeing Ewan McGregor cry i cant handle that lol and i litterally never cry my eyes are like sealed shut but as soon as i hear that cry you cant stop em so NOW i'm actually for really leaving hopefully my verbal daireah is finished and that you actually understand what i actually said in here since i really always forget to do punctuation and stuff like that but KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
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Reviewed By: AngelsRebellion [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2006 22:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT!
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Title: AWESOME FIND!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Daxemon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2006 11:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I judy discovered you and your story. Please do not leave me hanging witht he way you ended chap 7. I will hunt you down and make you update. Please don't let me down. I need to know what happens. THANKS
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Title: I LOVE YOU
Reviewed By: yashagurl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2006 01:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg i loved this chappie i love this story. it's great! i feel like im shuichi though im a (girl) and dude i got so into the story that i over reacted with shuichi. this story is so amazing, its the greatest story i've read yeti hope you take a carrer in writing just dont be a sadistic prick like erie. onegai update im dying to know what'll happen next it's like my daily high. (though its the only thing that i've ever gotten high from.) ja! and update soon or i'll... or i'll... uh...um.. ok or i'll eat all of your cookies!
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Reviewed By: yashagurl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2006 00:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg this story is awesome i can't beleive you only have 7 reviews you need hundreds of them! this story rivals the real thing. i went to bed at 10 pm and woke up just to find out what happened at the end of chapter 2! i've never done that for any story i've read in all the 5 years i've been reading ffn. now its 1:02 am ! i have to read like one more chapter before im able to go to sleep.
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Reviewed By: Tenshi of Hikari [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2006 07:03 CST
Comment/Review:
oooh!! please update soon!! I loved the under the table part but what REALLY got me were "...We're lovers." *squeals slightly*
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Title: I LOVE IT!
Reviewed By: Arie Date [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2006 06:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I SERIOUSLY FREAKING LOVE THIS STORY! Please tell me that you'll update soon. Halloween is only like a week and a half away! So you should be posting soon after, right? OH please tell me that you will! The weird little E thing in- between some of the words in the fourth chapter was incredibly annoying. I was having to break down the words to actually understand what it is that you wrote. And YAY! Finally a LEMON! Kudos to you hun! I really did like this story. Your the only person I know of that has mad Shu something other than JUST a singer. And I totally love how you combined the 2. Maybe you could write another fic along these line but only using The Phantom Of The Opera? THAT would definatly be a fic I would read. Your writing style is one I have not seen before. You actually write like it's YOU that is experiancing what's going on. And while I have only read to the 4th chapter you can bet that this story is going in my favorites. I have a Naruto fic to recomend to you if your interested in that anime. It's called We Always Know by Vampiress-Kagome on fanfiction dot net. I'm the beta for that one and I really would like you tto check it out. See if you could help us make it more origional. Please? I generally don't ask people to do this. But I would really like it if you would. Just a thought. Onegai? And please keep up the awesome work. A serious fan Arie Date.
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Reviewed By: Tenshi of Hikari [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2006 10:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sigh* OH dear, I can't wait till Halloween (especially since I've got to be helping with the spook house!! I can't wait!!) and then after Halloween, we get more updates from you!!! Oh my goodness. I came here looking for a good fic to read and found tihs one and remembered reading the first two chapters a LONG time ago when thats all you had. I never even thought you updated ; I always this story in my head and never thought to check it. I just added to my faves like I should have done SOOO long ago. I can't believe I missed soo many updates!! This was absolutely beautiful.. Let me... October is a great month for... On the 9th, my mom's birthday, on the 10th, my play (me and these characters share something in common!!! I'm Miss Crabapple in our school play and next to miss quackenbush, I have the most lines, yippee! I can relate to Shuichi!! hee hee) I also have to help the Science club with the Spook house maybe being in it.. They always have a great one and I deeply regret not going last year.. they were better than the Barn of terror! And NOW!!! Even AFTER Halloween I get more of tihs story!!!! It's awesome!! You're a great writer!! I can't wait till October!!! *sstares at grey wig on dresser* *shakes it out of head* YAY!! I need sometihng else to read till then though.... *searches*
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Reviewed By: Inari_kari [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2006 18:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
After halloween? B-but people will start forgetting this story!!! I WILL start forgetting (short term memory loss). Sniff, please don't do this? Please write more more more? C'mon, you made me cry with your ending note...ah well...that's only two months...sixty two days...sixty two days...*dies* I hate you! *dies again*
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Title: WAY GOOD
Reviewed By: Inari_kari [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2006 21:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
Okay, please finish? This is absolutely gorgeous! I was totally holding my breath everytime they met and you've never let me down! Please? I'll love you forever if you email me and tell me you have the update. ^^it's makuhari_sen@yahoo.com Good luck and I think it's one of the best AU here!
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Title: I'm excited for you!
Reviewed By: Rayne_falls [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2006 09:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm excited that You got to see POTC! I get to see it tonight.... :) ANYway, I love this story! Moulin Rouge has become my obsession as of late, and while the lyrics have come up in the story, I've found myself on numerous occasions humming the tune in my head. You writing style is one that has made me smile every time I've finished a chapter, either from the the overall emotion of the chapter, or the strange instances where the story relates to my life(I have a very Yuki-like person in my life, cross your fingers for us! :) ). I love the storyline, the way you have accuratly portrayed the characters, and your wonderfull writing style! Keep up the GREAT work!
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