| "What would you do?" Reviews/Comments [ 59 ] |
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Reviewed By: 4chan On: December 29, 2012 18:22 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
The plot and idea isn't unusual, but these kind of stories do have the ability to turn out great. All depends upon the author,though. It sounds interesting, but the fact that you are getting Yusuke's name wrong is annoying. Seriously, Yuuske? That could be seen as an insult. |
Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2008 20:02 EDT
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this is a great story and i hope you continue it
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Reviewed By: kyekye [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2008 20:23 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was really good but also a bit confuseing please up date soon
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Title: Looking Forward
Reviewed By: Vyncent [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2008 13:04 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is so good to see you back again, and I hope that you are able to update soon. I hope that your holiday season was a good one. I can understand how tough some holidays can be, when there seems to be something, or someone missing that normally is there. My heart and prayers are with you during this time.
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2007 04:17 EST
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This was a great "half-chapter." Forced to play out their deeopest fear and guilt, -- how very evil. I'm glad to see you back to this. Sounds like it has been a difficult year indeed. I will hope the New Year will bring a new start, new hopes, and new happiness for you. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2007 00:56 EST
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I am sooooooooooooooooo sorry I truly mean it......I was only now able to find you truly intreaging story only now I had not seen it then and so could not have offered any word of incuragment even though such word can sometimes do more damage then anything *sob* I wish could have been there for you.....you write so beautifuly and could have been there for you, I only hope that your life is filled with happiness and the gray days a lit up by the sunshine in you life, I pray that you have a wanderfuly life, I hope God smiles down upon you.......I hope for you happiness..............hopefully your life has not been encased in stone as your heart sleeps.......as Kagomes has............Nyuka
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Reviewed By: Vyncent [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2007 20:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have been there many times over the years, and although your last 12 months have been very trying, know that you are not alone, and despite it all, it will get easier. My prayers remain with you in this time of need. Your story is still very intriguing and the quality does remain. If you need to adjust anything, it would be that there is a sudden transition from the battle at the end of the prior chapter, and in this one, there is no indication of how our three heroes succeeded in defeating their opponent. Other than that, the story seems to be doing quite well, and I look forward, as always, to your next chapter.
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Title: amazing
Reviewed By: miko_onna [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2007 21:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
my gosh i love this story!!! who is it tht is going to end up waking her?? lol plz plz post soon i love it!!! ill b waiting!!!
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2007 05:08 EDT
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I understand , I'm just glad that you are ok.
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Title: YAYNESS
Reviewed By: Mysterious_Tears [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2007 16:05 EDT
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woohoo!! new chapter!! it was great as usual! and again... im sooo sorry, but im truly glad i could help at all. if ya ever need anything.. just ask!! ^_____^ till your next amazing chapter in this great story ~Mysterious_Tears~ Kudo's
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Reviewed By: snowecat32 On: June 13, 2007 15:45 EDT
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You messed up, there was no mention of what race the priestess's son was in the previous chapter, so how would they know it was a kitsune? Just 'cause the audience knows doesn't mean the characters do. Aside from the obvious/overused Kur/Kag element in here, it's a good story.
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2007 04:37 EDT
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That was a wonderful chapter. It really brought me right back into the story. Lots of teasers and poignant moments. Very nicely written. I smiled at the half-cat, half-wolf woman with Kuwabara. How perfect for him! The preparations for battle are really building the suspense to her revival. I think Yusuke is meeting this trial the right way, but how will Hiei respond? And I wonder if Kurama or Youko will be the one to face someone? There are good possibilities for both. I can't wait until they get to her. This is such a wonderful story. And I'm so glad to see you writing again. Thanks for sharing this with us!
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Reviewed By: HentaiVixen [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2007 23:19 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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love it!! please up date soon! lemons? please?!
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2007 09:48 EDT
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Hi! I was just looking through some of my favorite stories, and had to read through this one again. I hope you will be able to come back to it soon. It is definitely one of the better ones out there, and I would dearly love to see how it turns out.
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Reviewed By: Mysterious_Tears [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2007 01:29 EDT
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i know it may have been a small while sense you have lost you father... but i know that it can seem like a life time at times.. then other times it seems like just yesterday.. i lost my grandmother on January 31st.. i had to watch my mother die a little on the inside.. and just now.. she is finaly trying to be herelf again.. no matter how long its been.. it takes time.. and i justw anted to let you know that i understand and that this is a great story!! so when your rady you will update.. and im sure it will be perfect and well worth the wait ^____^ so... im looking forward to it.. and i just wanted to say.. keep up the good work :D ~Ja Ne~ Mysterious_Tears
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