| "Change of Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: RadioActiveRedhead [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2008 01:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm a Naraku/Kagome lover. I really am! It was the first fanfiction I ever wrote with that pairing that I actually finished. But anyways, your story is very nice and it catches my interest BUT (yes, there is a but) you should grab a spell checker or better yet, a beta reader. Because while a spell checker will get your mistakes, it can also put in words you don't mean to put in. Like "She saw her" turns into "She say her" if the spell checker thinks you're trying to put in something else. So ask around for a beta reader! If you'd like, I could read over your story (this one) and fix all the mistakes for you, send it back to you, and let you repost it. :D If you want, that is. Just let me know.
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Reviewed By: uni777 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2007 02:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice but there are some glitches but overall i giv u an 8
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Reviewed By: Ethril Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2007 23:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
omg, you better write more. This is one of be better Naraku/Kagome pairings in a modern world setting I have ever read.
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Title: Change of Heart
Reviewed By: Peach12345 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2006 15:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very good i really like this story i even added it 2 my favs so i can keep up when you update i hate it when people make these great storys and never finish them so please be diff from the people and finish or update because this is a good fanfic
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Title: Change of Heart
Reviewed By: Janie50989 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2006 20:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
2 more chapters,that's great,keep udpdating,I want to see what happens,please don't keep me in suspense.Keep up the great work & catch ya later.
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Reviewed By: Anime Lady PIMP [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2006 19:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
Awww. So cute. Bye-bye.
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Title: Change of Heart
Reviewed By: Janie50989 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2006 17:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job,I hope u update soon,keep up the great work,& catch ya later.
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Reviewed By: Anime Lady PIMP [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2006 14:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hate Kinky-hoe! And the mom, whos name I already forgot,! Long live Kagome, and the baby, and Naraku..... oh and Kanna....... and everybody else who matters like the cool sister!
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Title: Change of Heart
Reviewed By: Janie50989 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2006 23:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job,I hope u update soon,when its finished,please e-mail me,Janie50989@sbcglobal.net,keep up the great work,& catch ya later.
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