Reviewed By: WolfJade [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2006 14:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is wonderful so far. I gues I should explain the ratings. See, I average the numbers to get the overall rating. It seems easier for me. But you might want to proofread the chapters a few times, there were times where you used here instead of hear or the other way around. But other then that I really did like this. I never find any SM/YYH crossovers where Kurama is with Makoto and she's my favorite SM character other then Michiru and we all know she's never leaving Haruka. Anyway, please keep up the wonderful work and update soon.
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