| "Untold History" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: Yoda_123 On: February 18, 2010 17:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's a good story. To bad it was never finished.
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Reviewed By: hockeygirl9 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2009 01:33 CST
Comment/Review:
i'm sorry you stopped writing this story. It's really good and it is one of the few Appleseed stories i've been able to find. do you think it might be possible for you to start writing it again? i know it's been a long time but it would be really great! and even if you don't want to write more, can you recomend some good appleseed fanfics from any website? thank you!
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Reviewed By: DemanFox [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2009 15:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
its really good i hope u update it soon
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Reviewed By: J On: July 12, 2008 10:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Outstanding fic. Beautifully written, totally genuine, and fantastic fun. You draw characters like nothing else on earth. Great job. Don't suppose you ever finished this somewhere else? It's too good to stay incomplete!
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Reviewed By: xCarCrashHeartx [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2008 21:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDATE SOON! Your story's really good; a great prologue to the original story. Very creative and funny. Please update!
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Title: Unleash Hell
Reviewed By: Unleash Hell [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2008 17:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon.
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Title: Unleash Hell
Reviewed By: Unleash Hell [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2008 19:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story. I'd love to see it updated. This is only one of the few fanfictions for Appleseed that I've been able to find. What is your penname on fanfiction.net?
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Title: Brittchan
Reviewed By: Britt-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2008 14:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is amazing! Please cont.!
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Reviewed By: Evil Killer Poptarts On: January 28, 2008 23:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this is great! I love a good AU fic, and Appleseed to boot! I'm as guilty as anyone for abandoning fics to the aether, but please tell me there's more of this someplace!
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Title: WOOoO
Reviewed By: fmorgana On: July 30, 2007 14:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Like Atlantis I don't understand the lack of comments on your fic, (maybe appleseed isn't popular enough?) I can only agree with my fellow commenter about your style. And I love how you manage to explain the interaction between Deunan and Bri. I can so imagine them acting just like that before the events leading him to become a cyborg. This is really realistic and each character is endearing. Since you haven't posted anything in a long time I'm afraid that you decided to stop writing this fic, please don't. You have to continue ! I'll be glad (really) to read more chapters and see where this is going. Your last chapter left my imagination in turmoil, what will happen next ? 'Is Hades going to make a reapparition so he will be humiliated some more ? How is their relationship going to evolve and when ?) I hope this msg will give you the will to go on. Thanks for which is so far one of the best appleseed fanfiction I ever read (even unfinished)
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Reviewed By: FFD On: July 21, 2006 13:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
I just reciently became familar with Appleseed, and I have enjoyed your story. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Atlantis [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2006 18:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
Why you don't have any reviews is beyond me. Your writing style is superb and you've captured these characters before they were mangled by the events just before and during the course of Appleseed. Deunan is enjoyable and not annoying as some assertive female characters can be and Briareos' reaction to her presence and acceptance of the team is realistic and endearing. Your vocabulary is out of this world and I love the length. Not a ridiculous excuse of a paragraph that some people lable their chapters with and not novels in and of themselves. Thank you so much for this read. I hope, despite the lack of support, that you continue this fic. I'd love to see where you take it.
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