| "A Natural Urge" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: Snuggles On: January 01, 2009 20:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my, this little boy needs a new pair of shorts. I loved the read, all the dirty details wedged in with the smut. I think I'll read it again when I finish writing. If and when you write another, make it a bit less steamy, I don't want to lose control of myself again.
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Title: underminding
Reviewed By: stephyhyuga On: July 05, 2008 01:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok ummm...it was very good it undermines my obessesion w the whole damn show!!it was sexy hot and so goddamn..im speechless right now but very good!!!
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Reviewed By: Lynx212 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2008 00:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very well done and I think you need to do a sequel!! I ADORE Kouga/Miroku and there just isn't enough of it around.
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Title: OMFG
Reviewed By: indigo_twilight [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2006 19:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMFG...ur one sick woman...ur sick....and I love you....possibly the best yaoi I've read in a while....and I'm a big fan of ur work already..but u just got a HUGE fangirl!!!
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Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: SkatCat On: October 03, 2006 19:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've loved both of these characters each on their own but them together as a pair never crossed my mind. After reading your fic I have to say, DAMN! They are hot! The way you wrote it was so well done, it seemed so easily believable. I would love to see a sequel to this fic! The way you write these to together is amazing! Great story! Love to see Kouga and Miroku together again some time... ^_-
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Reviewed By: sesshys numba1 gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2006 16:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
i liked it alot if its not a one shot update soon!
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Reviewed By: lc On: June 12, 2006 00:56 CDT
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So I don't want to sound cliché, but...wow that was freaking hot. I've never read this pairing usually staying away from it but I just couldn't this time. Since the 'wanna fuck' line I'd been laughing and on the edge of my seat at he same time somehow hehe. Great mix of smut and humor!
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Reviewed By: Ranuel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2006 10:19 CDT
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Very well done. A slash story that's in character and believable is a rare gem. You need to read up on life in feudal era Buddhist monasteries though. Looking the way he does and with his sex drive I very much doubt he would be a virgin in any sense. It made for some good character interaction though.
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Reviewed By: Amie (NSI) On: May 25, 2006 21:47 CDT
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I usually run far, far from yaoi, darting panicked looks over my shoulder as I go, but, well, this was written by you. I love Kouga's "no-beating-around-the-bush" (groan!) attitude - the direct approach - "Wanna fuck?" - seems in character. Amusing in general. Poor Ginta! Thanks for writing!
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Title: I LOVE IT!!
Reviewed By: Littlesuteinu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2006 21:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
OMG!! Can't wait for the update! Have fun in china!!
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Title: kool
Reviewed By: adea neri On: April 30, 2006 07:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was way kool. inu is so cold hearted, but it would have been nice for him to show up and join them.
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Reviewed By: Kogas Hentai Luver [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2006 15:01 CDT
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Totally damn hot and fun to read. I love the realistic portrayal of the lemon. Koga, being a demon, would be huge, and the fact that Miroku is human and a virgin would make it extremely painful to be penetrated. The fact that Koga was able to back off showed a lot of maturity on his part. And then Miroku's solution worked out perfectly. Maybe had Koga tried to slowly prepare Miroku first, Miroku would have been able to withstand the pain. Hopefully, next time Koga will think ahead, but in the heat of passion common sense is shot to hell, lol ^_^ Nicely done. Thanks for such a great read.
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Title: LOVED IT
Reviewed By: amberlinat On: April 29, 2006 09:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very very very good! I really enjoyed it. Thank you started my sat off right
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2006 20:28 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, well this was most interesting, and most entertaining. Very well done indeed. There's not too many that can do this and do it well, but you did. I liked this a lot. And it wasn't just a get-down-and-do-it type of thing either. There was humor to it that made me lmao. Thank you, This was great!
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