| "A lifetime of Illusion" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
Title: So sad!
Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2011 21:34 EDT
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I'm just so sad and disappointed! It's been a long time. I know that you've probably had a lot on your plate, as do I and a lot of others. But, this story is just way too awesome for you to just abandon it like you have! I pray that you will comeback and give it the attention it deserves! Please! B reading U! |
Reviewed By: Jaden_Birdie_Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2009 13:05 EDT
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This is the 5th Time that I've read this and I am sad that you haven't updated/finished it. I realize life can get in the way so I hope that you can finish this in the future.
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Title: loved it
Reviewed By: skipsterrr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2008 02:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story was AMAZING...i loved it so much, u should most definitely continue with it. ur writing is amazing and i really hope u can one day add more chapters and hopfully finish the story signed ur newst fan skipsterrr
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Title: loved it
Reviewed By: skipsterrr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2008 02:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story was AMAZING...i loved it so much, u should most definitely continue with it. ur writing is amazing and i really hope u can one day add more chapters and hopfully finish the story signed ur newst fan skipsterrr
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Reviewed By: emily zahrt On: April 03, 2007 20:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like your story!! but there are times when you mix present and past tense together, and that makes things stop and start in your story. there were also a few spelling mistakes, but not many, and didn't interupt the flow very much, if any. the main thing though was that you had a few places where words were missing, so just keep an eye out for those! :) but overall i do really like your story, and think that your doing a great job with all of the odd details. the bracelet and how InuYasha treats her servents are a few! but don't let your writing of InuYasha get too soft. if you're going with 'she's just how she was as a guy' thing, make sure she stays.... mmmmm... 'tough'. i know that she needs to soften up some, but make sure that you don't too much or you'll change her character completely. just some things to think about!! - emily zahrt
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Reviewed By: inuyashawifey [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2007 20:04 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
plz update soon i want 2 know wat will happen can u update the other stories 2 they r all awesome plz
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Title: good
Reviewed By: ladytokyo [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2006 20:17 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
MAn this was good. You have to update plz and could you update Reiniku please I really like that story.
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Reviewed By: LagunaL8 On: November 22, 2006 01:18 EST
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Wonderful story so far. Actually only came to skim through it a bit but ended up reading every bit of it XD
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Reviewed By: petpeeves123 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2006 14:18 EST
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This is getting exciting. That evil Naraku killed kohaku. Poor Kohaku didn't deserve to be beheaded. I wonder what is going through the minds of the council members
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Reviewed By: Miststalker [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2006 03:08 EST
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Since Inuyasha is female in this story it does not belong in the Yaoi section that is misleading. Other then that very good writing.
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Reviewed By: lare On: August 21, 2006 09:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lovely!!! Inuyasha is a bit OOC but it makes her so sweet, and sesshomaru is also so romantic!
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Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2006 20:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I found this story on AFF.net and just loved it! I had a feeling though it was unfinished. Please update soon. ~B reading U!
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Reviewed By: Carrieny On: May 26, 2006 09:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's official. I am now in love with this story! :) At first, when you wrote "his other arm" during the lemon I was thinking "that can't be right" until you explained it next. Kouga doesn't seem very happy. Hope he doesn't cause any trouble to the couple. I don't really like him. Hope he doesn't do anything. Hope you update soon. By the way, are you still continueing with your other fic, "Mating"?
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Reviewed By: petpeeves123 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2006 00:03 EDT
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Well their mated now. Kouga is so Jealous!
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Reviewed By: petpeeves123 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2006 00:02 EDT
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I had to write a review. At first I was skeptical about this story, but once I read the second chapter now I'm hooked!
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Reviewed By: LadyIvy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2006 23:58 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, I'm so drawn into this story. Inuyasha and Sesshomaru's relationship is so difficult to comprehend, yet it's also deeply rooted in mutual fear and affection. I'm so glad he took it upon himself to initiate the mating--if he'd let Inuyasha make the first step, they'd never get together. I like how the phoenix attack jumpstarted his resolve. The lemon was hot--I need to ask you for pointers. Love how Sesshomaru regained his arm during mating but was so engrossed in Inuyasha that he didn't notice. The idea of Sesshomaru as a hentai is hilarious to me, and their private interactions make the story that much more enjoyable. Wonder what's gonna happen with Kouga. Is he gonna confront Inu and thus risk Sesshomaru's wrath? Will his anger drive him to side with Naraku? Who knows (other than you)? I enjoy all of your Sess/Inu fics, but I'm finding this one is rapidly becoming my favorite. Patiently waiting for the new update...
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Reviewed By: petpeeves123 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2006 23:33 EDT
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I had to write a review. At first I was skeptical about this story, but once I read the second chapter now I'm hooked!
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Reviewed By: AngelsRebellion_lo On: May 25, 2006 13:53 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
At first when I noticed that Sess suddenly had two arms I was like 'Okay, that's odd. She's completely lost it' lol. Great chapter, absolutely loved it. But will Inuyasha really stop searching for the jewel shards? I mean, it's kind of her duty isnt it? Is she going to tell her friends that she and Sess are mated? I like the ooc Sess by the way. Well, kind off ooc. Can't wait to see what happens next!
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Reviewed By: Jaden_Birdie_Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2006 21:18 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hehe...I've read all of your fics and I must say, they are so good. I hope a writing faerie bites you and you update this fic soon. Ja!
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Title: my my
Reviewed By: lare On: May 13, 2006 15:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is good, at first i was a bit uncetain if I should read this. But your story was soooo interesting that I had to read it! =) I hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: AngelsRebellion [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2006 02:55 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NICE. At first I was a little skeptical about reading this, but I simply love it. Excellent story.
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Title: Completely Awesome
Reviewed By: Avarwen [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2006 17:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now THIS is good writing. You've managed to take a well-worn plot and bring it back up to snuff again. You're writing is well thought out, and you've put it together in a very nice fashion that flows easily together. Gender-bender fics and ones like that are not usually very well executed, but you've managed to come up with a believable plot, interesting changes in the characters, and believable reactions, without overdoing or adding too many unnecesary things to the story. You're doing an excellent job! ^_^ ~Avarwen~
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