| "Exploration to bliss" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Title: Good idea, poor execution
Reviewed By: Emsterbem On: September 14, 2010 23:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoy this fic very much, but you really need to work on spelling and grammar. The errors are so prevalent that it makes it hard to read. Sora is too... stupid. He seems like a four year old girl. I love the idea you have going, and I'm all for lots of yaoi sex goodness. There is something to be said for a bit of scholarship in one's work.
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Title: im late XD but still...
Reviewed By: Kai_Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2007 02:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
this is a hella hot story XD CONTINUE, PLEASE~ ^^;;;
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Reviewed By: dark karena [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2006 04:31 CST
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this was the best kingdom hearts fan fic i read yet plz write some more
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Reviewed By: Yami_hime [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2006 09:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
whaha everyone is havin'sex with eachother... it's great! *gives candy* write more!!! Your fic is holy!!
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Reviewed By: Twinstar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2006 22:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh I can't wait till you write the next chapter. I couldn't stop reading this. This is amazingly good.
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Reviewed By: mindfreak [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2006 18:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
how many lemons can one person put in one fanfic? just ask smexy_Kato! THE LEMON MASTER!!! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Keyana On: July 09, 2006 21:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this story! *Yaoi fan to death* Lol. I really do hope you udate soon. It's been a month. You really do know how to make a lemon. I salute you! *salutes* I'll be waiting for more ass fucking pleasure! Oh yeah, maybe you should have Cloud and Sora have a lemon. *smirk* Okay, I'm done rantiong. xD Hope you update soon! ~Key
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Reviewed By: Keyana On: July 09, 2006 21:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this story! *Yaoi fan to death* Lol. I really do hope you udate soon. It's been a month. You really do know how to make a lemon. I salute you! *salutes* I'll be waiting for more ass fucking pleasure! Oh yeah, maybe you should have Cloud and Sora have a lemon. *smirk* Okay, I'm done rantiong. xD Hope you update soon! ~Key
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Title: AWESOME!!
Reviewed By: Kitty BoBo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2006 00:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW... thats the first thing i said when i read this story... COULD YOU PLEASE FINISH IT?! I love the plot and the storyline, and your lemons are the best; so well thought out and time consuming. Sex that is actually believable! Keep up the good work, and i'll be looking forward to the update! ^_^
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Title: mmmm
Reviewed By: fooshie5565 On: July 01, 2006 04:08 CDT
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yummy- delicious lemony goodness.
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Title: btw...
Reviewed By: apples91912 On: July 01, 2006 04:07 CDT
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by the way- there's no such thing as too much sex or scenes "too closely written".
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Title: yeah!
Reviewed By: apples91912 On: July 01, 2006 04:06 CDT
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this story is really good, and the lemons are even better. all the foreplay really sets the mood, unlike many other lemons, where it's just a quick fuck and that's it. also, most x rated fanfics have absolutely no plotline, but this one has one that is easy to follow. i thouroughly enjoyed this, and i still am. thank you for portraying your writing skills through mediaminer and keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: Zyf in hiding On: May 23, 2006 18:08 CDT
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Write more, please? I really like this story, but the drama makes me want to cry. Could there be a happy ending soon? Have Sepheroth put in prison or something. But I really like it, and you have to continue!
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Reviewed By: Tama-kun On: May 03, 2006 10:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love you story and cant wait till you update it again. The sex scenes are,I think a little to closly written but they are still amazing to unknown limits. I really hope you update soon i cant wait to see what Shepie does to Sora and if he gets out of it. I hope to hear from you soona dn would love to tlak to you. if oyu want to you can e-mali me at gravitation1317@yahoo.com Id love to talk. Ja Ne
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