| "In the Eyes of the Beholder" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: adea neri On: November 08, 2006 01:12 CST
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PLEASE UPDATE IM WAITING.
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Reviewed By: adea neri On: May 28, 2006 15:40 CDT
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i love this story. it funny and sad. please make it a happy ending or ill cry.
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2006 06:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope you update soon.! I want to see what you come up with next.
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Reviewed By: shippousfriend(ffnet) On: May 11, 2006 18:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an awesome sotry!! I think its so sweet... and pretty original. I love how the sensitive Inuyasha is portrayed.... Keep writing its great!!
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Title: elenacala
Reviewed By: elenacala [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2006 17:38 CDT
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wow , i lvoe this fic, it doesn't seem so much of a fan fic as it seems to be able to stand on its own. i really am enjoying this tory and the complexity of the characters. You have a very flowing writing style that is easy to get into and understand. Please update soon.
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Title: ok
Reviewed By: dick channel On: May 10, 2006 05:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
to many spelling errors and what with kadome i thought she died is she a recaration of the one that died....why would he fall for a new kagome instead of kikyo if kagome died........
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Title: Finally a story
Reviewed By: docter and patient Dre On: May 07, 2006 20:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm going to say thank you for actually writing a Fan fiction with some originality. The story is intriguing and I really want to what happens each chapter. Good job!
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Title: Great Job!
Reviewed By: rainydays [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2006 15:53 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this fanfic! It's very unique, and refreshing. I was just wondering about the whole Kag and Inu story from the past. Did he still have his travels with her to find the sacred jewel? Oh.. and if so, wouldn't that name ring a bell to him. Hopefully Inu isn't that thick. Haha! I sure hope Inu can see past the ugliness.. and discover the true Kagome. Wonderful Job!! I hope you update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Ghetto Fab [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2006 08:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story...update soon
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