| "Years Away From What I Need" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: insomniac1970 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2013 02:27 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I stumbled across this story by accident, and I thought that it was absolutely brilliant. Nakatsu was my second favorite character after Mizuki in Hana Kimi, and I happy to see him achieve every dream but Mizuki. The only problem with this story is that it isn't finished. I hope that you return to this story at some point and complete such a wonderfully lovely piece of fluff. I really made my day when I read. Please come back with more soon. Cheers! |
Reviewed By: Toast and Roast On: March 02, 2011 04:42 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man I feel so sad for being so late on finding you, you're such an awesome writer! I'm only on chapter 5 but I'm absolutely LOVING this story. You are amazing, the story is super cute, and I'm so glad to see Nankatsu in love! |
Reviewed By: Faelady [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2009 22:28 EDT
Comment/Review:
I love you so much right now! These last two chapters are so much of the awesome that I almost do not have words to describe. I mean... Nakatsumom! Soccer ball chocolates! Kagurazaka! Pretty pretty princess! Seriously wonderful, and excellent writing as well.
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Reviewed By: INUKAMI On: June 13, 2007 06:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!! YOU ARE SOOO CRUELLLL!!!! ITS BEEN OVER A YEAR AND YOU HAVENT UPDATED THIS STORY!!! TT^TT UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!! PLEASE!!!! XD
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Reviewed By: Shaley Wiles On: May 26, 2006 14:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I tried as hard as I could to rate it harshly and find some reason why you shouldn't get all 10s but... I couldn't find one. Your story is so awesome and I really hope that you do update soon. I don't even particularly care for Nakatsu and you've made me want to read more! Please, oh please, update~
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Reviewed By: klxzz On: April 30, 2006 20:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
gahh! that is really unfair. I know its only the second day, but plzzzzzzz hurry up and update!!! Its suchhhhhh a good story! Nakatsu IS my favorite Hana Kimi character (minus Umeda) and uh, i just love this story, so keep up with the good work.
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