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| "Bad Girl" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: PBallPsycho [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2008 09:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've read many fanfics. I've even got one work in progress. Regardless, next to amazing authors as yourself, I feel very inadequate. I await your next update, and can't wait to see what you throw out there next.
| Reviewed By: libertyrjac [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2006 20:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Solid beginning! Your characters are good and the storyline's got me curious to see what you'll do with them. One thing though, can you work in a physical description of Kairi & Sei? It's hard to picture them without it and I want to know what hairstyle, of Kairi's, the other girls are copying? Keep it up, this story's got potential!
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