| "One Stormy Day" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing On: April 18, 2002 11:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
lol, sorry. Habit.... Um, this took too long getting out! I'd almost forgotten about it! ;) Well, now they know she's alive.
BTW, what's with the torn picture? What's missing from the pic now? And this Daniel.... Something's up with him. You're hiding something about him.... What did he mean 'enjoy it while it lasted'? Hmmm, kay, kill Daniel, give Bulma back her memory, kick Yamcha's butt (I loved that 'lol' in there!), Vegeta/Bulma lime.... Trunks! Kay, that do it?
Ok, you might not kill Daniel.... Seems like a victim of determinism. He thinks he can't help who he is.... But who is he!?
Update! lol I'll be waiting.... |
Reviewed By: veggies grl On: April 11, 2002 19:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
i like wwhere this is going. i just hope bulma doesnt fall for that one guy. vegeta better get there in time. good fic! get the next chapter in soon please!!!! |
Reviewed By: thibena-me On: March 23, 2002 09:28 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this sounds really cool. i hope you add the next chapter soon. |
Reviewed By: Kandy On: March 22, 2002 17:24 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What's is going to happen to Bulma and Vegeta? I need to know. You must write more chapters. |
Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing On: March 21, 2002 13:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I really like this! So, are Bulma and this guy going to get together before she and Veg do? Vegeta's going to come in all action and no thought and Bulma's not going to recognize him, or will this guy take Bulma somewhere else? Or will Vegeta even find Bulma if she's now 'Jane Doe'? Oh, will the author answer any of these questions in the next chapter? lol IE-Please hurry with update! lol |
Reviewed By: amy379821 On: March 20, 2002 16:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please write more! I'm really interested in what's going to happen. I really like the story a lot, and I look forward to reading more! |
