| "Spring Fog" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Anime_Gal_12 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2007 16:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story was good but you kept repeating things like checking your cell phone. The story was great.
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Title: Awesome!
Reviewed By: kirara_sango [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2007 00:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow i loved it! The beginnig i was goin to give up until her last mistake. It made me want to read on! Write more I will read and i am looking forward to reading more!
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Reviewed By: cloverfire19 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2006 20:48 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! That was amazing! I was biting my nails throughout the whole thing. And i love the way you described Darian. And the 'sexy David Bowie voice'. That was great! Kudos!
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Title: O.O
Reviewed By: Thao_Lorakin [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2006 17:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
write more!!!!!! i LOVED it. i love all fics like this. like a fic called "The Willows" by momsdarksecert. i plan on reading more of your stories, and look foward to the future.
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Reviewed By: Sueric [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2006 13:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
Very nicely done! I thoroughly enjoyed reading this piece, and I'm glad you shared it with us! The care with which you chose your words was obvious. All of it seemed carefully crafted to add to the overall feeling of anxiety and suspense. The thing that I liked most was the bit of ambivalence toward the end. You gave closure while allowing a bit of room in case you wished to write a sequal (which I would love to read). Overall, very high quality writing, and I'm so glad you chose to share it with us!
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Reviewed By: Fanilia [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2006 20:45 CDT
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Wow I loved it. I love short stories and horror suspense, and the supernatural are my favorite kind to read. The timing of the story was great. It started slowly giving the reader a look at a confident, young person who is not given to flights of fancy, and then unraveling her with fog and hearing noises in the night. The climax of the danger turning from imagined to real was a good turn and really made the story exciting. Then very end gave closure and a promise of dangers in the foggy night for others who venture out.~Fanilia
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Reviewed By: Broken Visage [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2006 19:53 CDT
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Well, that certainly was creepy. The beginning had me wondering where you going with it, since I knew it was actually you and not just a simple first-person perspective. But yeah, creepy end to that. But what's this about your first original? I thought you had written some before. Not that it matters, this was great. I'm not really in the mood to be critical about it, so I'll just leave with this: the flow was great and you really had some pretty unique ways to say things ("We're Going For Help" smacked "Let's Wait Here"). I thoroughly enjoyed it.
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