| "Children of Destruction" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: SaiyanBoyTrunks [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2002 19:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well that was certainly interesting though if I were you I would run it through a spell checker or try and find someone to spell it for ya... Thats why the spelling and grammar was alil low... but I gotta hand it to you, it was a pretty good story for a youngster... so bravo to you, Im looking forward to reading the next chapters....
Ps. sorry bout the carnage of chapter 10.... I was in the "wanna have some violence mood" when I was writing ...hehe ^^;; |
Reviewed By: trunksgirl2525 (again:-P) On: April 14, 2002 18:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG HOW COULD U DO THAT TO ME!!!!???!?!?!?!?!?! OOOOOOOO, THE NERVE SOME PPLZ HAVE!!!!!!!!! So, who is it, huh huh huh? Oh come on, just tell me! Please? Oh well, if ure not going to , I'll just have to yell at u more! MEANIE!!!!!!!!!!! Oh wait, I just had a thought. Is it Goku? Has he finally some back form the dead? Hm. g2g |
Reviewed By: Trunks Serenity Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2002 21:31 CST
Comment/Review:
BUT! that still dont mean I'm givin MY Trunks :P
Ha! HA! HA!
(how taunting)thinking*how childish,hey am i suppose to care,nah ;D*HA! |
Reviewed By: Trunks Serenity Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2002 10:43 CST
Comment/Review:
ooh i want more chapters and if you dont put up more i'll do... ah something *thinking* i'll get back to you on that but WHEN I DO YOU BETTER HAVE MORE STORIES UP
Ya HERE ME
p.s. HE'S MINE AND YOU CA'NT HAVE HIM >:0 |
Reviewed By: mizu megami [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2002 06:12 CST
Comment/Review:
telling all you pplz now i need a review from some one else befor i put up more
im so mean,
:)mizu:P |
Reviewed By: Kandy On: March 20, 2002 15:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am glad you clarivied that in the author's note. Now I just can't seem to wait to find out about the other kiddies. Please write another chapter before I have to kill myself!! |
Reviewed By: mizu megami [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2002 20:05 CST
Comment/Review:
er hopefully*...oops hehe *sweatdrops* |
Reviewed By: mizu megami [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2002 20:01 CST
Comment/Review:
no the story is not about Galaxia its about all the lil DBZ kids or, for the Veggie-chan fans, the "brats" but ill put up next ch hopfully tomarrow.
glad someone reviewed *glares at other pplz*,
:)mizu:P |
Reviewed By: Kandy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2002 19:43 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like were this story is heading, please contiune! |
Reviewed By: Trunks Serenity Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2002 21:27 CST
Comment/Review:
>:O OHH THE NERVE I WOULDNT BLOW ANYONE BUT TRUNKS SO I DONT KNOW WHAT THE HELL U TALKIN
BOUT *very enraged* SO GET THE FACTS STRAIGHT
BFOR U DECIDE 2 TALK BOUT SOMEONE BLOWIN SOMEONE!
*TURNS HEAD OPPOSITE WAY* PLUS YOUR STORY IS TOO
SHORT AND I NEED MORE INFO ON THE CHARECTER GALADERIA ! KAY! *cooling down a bit deciding 2b
kind* oh and keep up the good work! |
