| "Naruto's Life" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Title: cant believe im sayin this
Reviewed By: Shadow_Man On: July 30, 2006 21:24 CDT
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well like the title, i cant believe im sayin this but here i go. out of all the naruto fics that ive read (and i have read just about all of the original,AU, and contiuations and even some divergence) id have to put this up in the top ten list. now where id put it would be about 4 to 7 i cant really tell because i havent really kept tabs on all of them but yours would deffinatly be some where with in that range. just keep up the good work and if you have any questions just put it down on the fic and im sure one of your many fans (including me) will try to sort things out. well i g2g ja ne
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Reviewed By: Crazy_Killa On: July 25, 2006 11:59 CDT
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well this is one of the few stories that i find of great intrest so keep on writing. i love the fights cuz they have so really sweet action so don't change them. the writing although is great has a few things that u can work on like the way you put down the third person aspects, it was kinda moving in to different aspects like first person to third person but other than that i have no complaints. all things in mind you did great and if i knew where you lived i go over there and give u a pat on the back c ya later P.S. don't for get to update soon
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Reviewed By: sakedrunkdrinker On: June 11, 2006 17:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is freaking awesome keep it going and dont stop
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Reviewed By: kitsuna [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2006 16:03 CDT
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10/10 on everything and i mean it. I stuck wit ya, do i get,like, a cookie or anything? please? I still love this fic. That ain't gonna change! this is on my favorites list! You see...im the idiot who reviewed down there V Update soon!! Ja Ne!! V V
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Reviewed By: shadow kit On: May 28, 2006 14:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG, i love this fic!!!! You must update soon, im begging you! I must see what happens next, i cant wait! Please please PLEASE update soon.
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Reviewed By: Ryugenkotsu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2006 16:06 CDT
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Now a Naru/Anko fic is rather.....rare to read.
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Reviewed By: gayness [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2006 23:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool i really like the bloodline limit.
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Reviewed By: Naruto_Lovr [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2006 14:33 CDT
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YAY! YOU UPDATED! ^^ I love the idea of 10 elemental clans. Naruto thunder clan! w00t! Update soon.
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Reviewed By: Naruto_Lovr [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2006 20:00 CDT
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Woah! Update soon! I want to see what happens next!
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Title: Nice Work
Reviewed By: dskwolf [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2006 22:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this story. The bloodline seems to be quite original, and all the details seem to mesh well.. Kepp up the great work!
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Title: Cool Bloodline
Reviewed By: Dragonsrose4 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2006 22:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked the story so far. I thought that his bloodlimit was pretty cool, and unusual because I usually see a combo of the sharingan and byakugan. I too would like to see a NaruHina in the plot, but that is a suggestion (hint). :P I also want to see Iruka's reaction to Naruto's change. If Jiraiya is going to remain in Konoha with Naruto, anyway they can stay in Yondaime's house? I think it's general consensus that Naruto's his son. Now that he's come into his bloodline why not live in his father's house. I also feel sad about Jiraiya. He seems bitter of his relationship or lack of one after his talk with Tsunade. Maybe you can create a character for him. I really can't think of any original character that might suit him, well maybe Anko or that Anbu girl. They both seem like they have experienced a lot of pain in their lives. Ok this review is wayyyyy too long. Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: Auron-san On: May 02, 2006 13:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pretty good, except rasengen is spelt rasengen, and 45 yen is only 45 cents americian currency... and about pairings I suggest: SasuSaku, NaruIno, and hina kiba
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Title: Nice
Reviewed By: A_bigfoot37 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2006 22:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would like to see Naru/Hina pairing. You don't have to listen to this request. This is merely a suggestion.
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