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| "Relationships" Reviews/Comments [ 41 ] | | Pages (3): [ 1 2 3 > » ] | Reviewed By: Vanessa On: June 18, 2003 22:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just LOVE this peice! I hope you write another chapter, maybe more of Vegeta *hint hint* hehe! I almost cried when I read about Bra's evil bedtime attacks on Vegeta and how he let her stay with him cuz she was afraid. It was too precious! Keep up the good work! | Reviewed By: Rascal On: February 20, 2003 12:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is very engaging. I discovered it searching for "readable" fics, an endangered species, it would seem. I remembered you as being a good writer, so I looked up your name and found this story. I'm very glad I did. The storyline is great so far. It keeps me interested, hooked even. The way you portray each of the characters is right on. With the exception of some minor agreement issues, the spelling & grammar are clean. Excellent job! I am, anxiously awaiting the next chapter.
Your fan,
-Rascal | Reviewed By: Xorwais On: January 16, 2003 11:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Completely hates this chapter?! Are you insane ore what?!
I've never laughed so hard in my life before! hahahaha :D gawd, I've got tears in my eyes :D
I really liked the other chapters aswell :).. Heh, you made me like Chichi.. sort of, not just with this fic, but also with "the bet"
Aw shit! I was so caught up reading your fics I actually forgot to review the others!
Excuse me, I have to go :) See you in a second.. | Reviewed By: TrunksGirl On: December 05, 2002 09:24 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was a cute story but it was a little confusing. | Reviewed By: SNAPGRAGON On: November 02, 2002 23:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS IS ONE OF MY FAVORTIE FICS...PLEASE CONTINUE THE STORY....I KNOW YOU PROBALLY HAVE LOTS TO DO.....
BUT PLEASE TRY TO FIND THE TIME TO FINISH IT........ | Reviewed By: Masamune On: October 02, 2002 17:27 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the newest chapter was sooooooooo cute!!!!!!!!!! | Reviewed By: Badiyannu On: September 27, 2002 16:40 CDT
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AWW! I really liked this chapter! It portrayed a softer side of Vegeta but still showed his real character! You're a great author!
And, Bra used to be like my least favorite character, but now I'm starting to like her! | Reviewed By: manga, the Awesome One in pigtails [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2002 09:12 CDT
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*lol* Bra is an absolute doll... an absolutely spoiled doll. This was a great chapter, very cute, though I can't really see Bra as having NO involvement in training and such. | Reviewed By: Susan On: September 26, 2002 03:24 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chap was simply adorable, just like Bra. It looks like she does have daddy wrapped tightly around her little finger. Nice surprise making this one about father and daughter, when I thought it would be Goku, Krillin or someone else. Can't wait to find out who's next. Oh, and congrats on buying yourself a car. Have fun ^_^. TTYL-Sue | Reviewed By: hippiechick83 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2002 23:01 CDT
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um...what to say, what to say....First off, I can't stand Videl. I think you already knew that though and if you didn't, you would have figured it out during the next few chapters of The Sister Saga or my next big fic I'm going to write (Curious yet?)...All-in-all though, good job. Mushy and senitmenal is right, but good.
I can't wait for your next update, and thank you so much for reading The Truth. I'm glad you're enjoying it. I want to know who the person with the comedy is, but I guess you're not going to tell me, just like I'm not going to tell you who Trunks is talking to! Well, I guess that's it. Until next time, Peace and Out. | Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2002 20:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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'Pan grew over her shoulder as she hopped out the car.' I didn't know you could 'grew' over your shoulder.... I will have to learn this trick. Sorry. Sadistic me.... Besides, anyone who dares to say that Yamcha is better than Vegeta deserves to be mocked....
Aw, Gohan is such a coot wittle man, asking his girlfriend if she wants to go to the 'next step'. Awwwwwwwwwwww! *continues making coot baby noises at Gohan*
AWWW! He's even cooter asking her to marry him! That's so SPECIAL! (I'm so glad Vegeta just took Bulma and didn't do all this sentimental crap!) At least they got the Son tradtion of dating and sparring down pat....
'“Yes as in the rhythmic movement to a beat such as that coming from the stereo over there.”' Cleverness and the Son name should never go together. It's too much of a shock!
Oh no! Bulma and Vegeta missing! *rolls eyes* Like we don't know what they're doing! heehee
Comedy? Master Roshi, Goku, Yamcha, Yajirobe, Vegeta(hey, he can be comic at times), Trunks, Goten, um, anyone I missed? It's a he, right?
Well, if Vegeta can't pay you back. I will. Go read 'Pleading Truths'. You'll never guess what's going on! LOL Not even Vegeta would guess! (Oh, I bet Bulma would beg to differ on the Yamcha's-better-than-Vegeta thing ~_^)
Oh, good luck with your bf. | Reviewed By: xangeliz91487x [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2002 14:29 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was soooo cute!!! good job on another wonderful update, and it's sooo nice to have you bak!!!! for the next chapter, if you want some comedy i'd definitely have to say goku or krillin, you can't go wrong when ur making fun of the *cough* dumb *cough* ones. that was extremely sweet. But u know what, Yajarobe would be pretty funny though... | Reviewed By: darkwarriorgoten [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2002 07:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, nice update! It's been awhile, so ummmmmmmmm, yeah. I'm glad your back!!! You said next chapter would be comedy, but we have no idea to who it is. I have a guess. THe obvious choice would be Goku, but that's TOO obvious, so I'm going to say Yajirobe! | Reviewed By: Susan On: August 29, 2002 03:02 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I really liked this one. Don't get me wrong, you know I've enjoyed them all. I just have a soft spot for those two and you described their relationship to a T. Next up Goku? Or maybe our favorite cueball Krillin...Guess I'll have to wait for the next chap to find out. Great job JB!! | Reviewed By: darkwarriorgoten [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2002 20:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! Nice Fic! I liked it alot! The whole Chichi-Goten thing was a new look on that birth, but not nessicerialy a negitave one, not to me anyways. I like Goten, and you explained the Trunks/Goten relationship well!!! You had me rolling in laughter when Bra wanted Vegeta to tie her dress! lol! I don't see how you get so many reviews! My fic has been up for a long time, and your the only one whose reviewed it!!! I'm going to kill my friend, he still hasn't reviewed!!! Anyways, Great fic!!! Keep up the good work!!! | | Pages (3): [ 1 2 3 > » ] |
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