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Reviewed By: xangeliz91487x [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2002 14:29 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was soooo cute!!! good job on another wonderful update, and it's sooo nice to have you bak!!!! for the next chapter, if you want some comedy i'd definitely have to say goku or krillin, you can't go wrong when ur making fun of the *cough* dumb *cough* ones. that was extremely sweet. But u know what, Yajarobe would be pretty funny though... |
Reviewed By: darkwarriorgoten [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2002 07:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, nice update! It's been awhile, so ummmmmmmmm, yeah. I'm glad your back!!! You said next chapter would be comedy, but we have no idea to who it is. I have a guess. THe obvious choice would be Goku, but that's TOO obvious, so I'm going to say Yajirobe! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: August 29, 2002 03:02 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I really liked this one. Don't get me wrong, you know I've enjoyed them all. I just have a soft spot for those two and you described their relationship to a T. Next up Goku? Or maybe our favorite cueball Krillin...Guess I'll have to wait for the next chap to find out. Great job JB!! |
Reviewed By: darkwarriorgoten [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2002 20:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! Nice Fic! I liked it alot! The whole Chichi-Goten thing was a new look on that birth, but not nessicerialy a negitave one, not to me anyways. I like Goten, and you explained the Trunks/Goten relationship well!!! You had me rolling in laughter when Bra wanted Vegeta to tie her dress! lol! I don't see how you get so many reviews! My fic has been up for a long time, and your the only one whose reviewed it!!! I'm going to kill my friend, he still hasn't reviewed!!! Anyways, Great fic!!! Keep up the good work!!! |
Reviewed By: Masmaune On: August 15, 2002 00:01 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sad, but very cute at the end! |
Reviewed By: Short Rochester [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2002 17:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
WOW! That was AWESOME! O__O
sr |
Reviewed By: hippiechick83 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2002 00:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey, hey, hey! You go girl friend! I'm so happy you updated, and you wouldn't believe how much I loved having it dedicated to me!!!
Damn! You've got me hyper now! I was just fine until I read your story and saw the dedication, and now I'm about to start bouncing in my chair! Does it seem I'm always hyper when I review?
Well, as a special treat for being so nice to me, I think I'm going to put forth special effort to edit the next chapter of The Sister Saga, and to get this new story finished. Trust me, I have been writing, it's just been going slow, but now that class is over...I can't wait to start writing all the time again! I guess that's all, so Peace and Out. |
Reviewed By: xangeliz91487x [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2002 13:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was really good. And about time you updated this one too...now how about 'the group'?...just a small hint. *wink* *wink* |
Reviewed By: manga, the Awesome One in pigtails [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2002 07:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gotta say I LOVE your take on Vegeta's thoughts. The whole story is great, of course, but I gotta stand up and say something for my favortie character. Can't wait to see you do Bulma, Trunks and Bra... oh, Videl would be way cool too. Aw heck, everybody, not just my favorites. You have a real special touch that really makes everyone three dimensional. :) |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2002 05:35 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again, you have blown me away. I eagerly await the next update! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: August 09, 2002 21:44 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aaawwww, that was sad and sweet. I've always thought that, in the marriage department, CC got the short end of the deal. I like the way you described out she felt when Goten was a baby and how hard it was to have to take care of him being that he was the mirror image of his dad. Great job! So who's next?? |
Reviewed By: Storm On: June 26, 2002 10:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As usual you have come out with another great fic. I just wish you would finish one of them >_ |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2002 14:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really great fic. I love the way you portray the relationship between Vegeta and Bra. I always love your fics...but I think this one is my favorite! |
Reviewed By: Greybus [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2002 16:48 CST
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ROFLMAO. Oh man, that las tchapter was hilarious. keep it up. |
Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing On: April 01, 2002 12:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
roflmbo! Oh, jeez, I guess Trunks is Trunks.... And Goten is...Goten. How--er cute? Or is that teenage-like. Yeah, that's a better description. Well, off to do more work at work! (sigh)... lol Write more! |
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