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Reviewed By: RadioActiveRedhead [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2008 13:43 CDT
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You should seriously fix the spelling mistakes in your summary. You spelled Hanyou wrong, Tempered wrong, couple wrong, patient wrong... I'm going to quick beta this and let you change it if you will. The words I write are ones you spelled wrong: Higurashi, Kikyou, Jaken, Koga can also be spelled Kouga (I'm really not sure about his spelling), SOLE is a part of a SHOE...SOUL is something that is a spiritual aspect of you, ONIGUMO is Naraku's human counterpart, Kanna (notice the double N, makes the name sound longer as if there is a pause between KA and NA) not kana, You said kanna can SUCH (you meant suck) the SOLE (Soul not sole of a shoe) of a person lol yeah, When you're describing Souta you said he's a "Sacredly" you meant SCARED-Y cat...Sacredly is like a holy object. THESE SPELLING ERRORS ARE ONLY IN THE PROLOGUE OF YOUR STORY please reread the rest of your story for mistakes. I, for one, reread my story at least 2 times before posting it. Please make sure your writing program has a spell checker downloaded on it. If not you can go to the "Fanfiction.net" website and on their front page they have a program you can download and use for writing stories, it does have a spell checker in it. Ciao, happy writing. (This is not a flame, if it was I would have been WAY more mean than this. I'm just helping with spelling.
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Reviewed By: blondefox910 On: January 15, 2007 17:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like your story i cant want to read what happen next so keep up the great work o
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Reviewed By: Anime Lady PIMP [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2006 14:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yasha is kinda slow ,huh?
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Reviewed By: iittssmmeeeeaaggaainn On: August 13, 2006 23:19 CDT
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hi. i am actually inufan13. i am to lazy to log in. i don't know if i already sed this but meh. this story is soo awesome lol. okay. and ppl have mistaken me for a 13 yr old. hence the name. i actually am NOT 13. just to make that clear. HAHA. okay update soooon!!!
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Reviewed By: Anime Lady PIMP [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2006 21:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh me likie please updat-ie
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Title: Its good but your spelling sucks (no offense)
Reviewed By: KK On: July 09, 2006 22:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its a great story but unfortunatly your spelling need help (SORRY IF ANYTHING AFTER THIS POINT SOUNDS RUDE) I dont remeber all of your mistakes but the tow that peeved me off was Romen(Ramen) its Ramen not Roman (Thats a person who inhabbitates a country called rome) and trust me I know how to spel it I have an obbsesion with that food (its tastes so good) and Minko(Miko)Its miko not minko and a few others mistakes were Kagera- proper spelling=Kagura,Higerashi-proper spelling=Higurashi and you spelt kittson wron I dont know the exact spelling but its like kitsune something like ( so I cant be lecturing you on that part of the spelling but anyways).... I still love the story so please update but also llok up the words and nevr spell ramen, roman(IT ORIGINATED FROM ROME, ITS NOT INSTNT NOODLES)but anyways update soon and sorry if this sounded rude
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Reviewed By: AznxPurity (nsi) On: July 08, 2006 23:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like it^^ i wish that i could see your puppy lol well i really hope that you update soon i want to know what happens next it's getting intresting =) keep writing and i'll keep reviewing
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