Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: wow. im speechless. this fic is amazingly good! i love how you made inuyasha sort of realize he loved kagome after she has an accident... i have no idea why i'm the first to review, because this fic is totally awesome! there was a couple of mistakes but nothing major. i hope you update soon, can't wait to read more!