| "Duty" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Title: YAY!!!!!
Reviewed By: lorenzomarfil [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2007 02:26 CST
Comment/Review:
I've waited for so long!!!!! You've finally updated and I loved it! Update!update!update!
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Title: Updatee!
Reviewed By: zomg nayerz [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2007 13:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is so beautiful! Please PLEASE PLEASEEE update! This is the best fanfic i think i've ever read!
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Reviewed By: Nimiko [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2007 12:18 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please tell me that you're going to continue the story. I wanna know what's going to happen next. So please update. :(
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Reviewed By: Son Faith no Oujo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2007 19:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has got to be one of the most beautiful SasuHina fics I've ever read! Please continue!
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: Michelleinugirl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2007 05:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow i loved it very much. I am also i fan of HinataxSasuke. You made them a cute couple in this story. Keep up the good work. =DD!
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Title: GRRR IM MAD
Reviewed By: lorenzomarfil [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2007 06:28 CST
Comment/Review:
=( You Should continue writing :(
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Title: yay!!
Reviewed By: lorenzomarfil [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2006 00:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
this is really great!!! update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: ClassicalTwist [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2006 18:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story! I just finished reading all that you wrote today. Update soon, I can't wait to see what happens with the psychotic twins. Though, I doubt it'll be that interesting, since they don't seem to be especially gifted fighters (compared to Konoha ninja that is) and there is no way they can stand up to Naruto, Sasuke, etc.
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Title: YAY!!!
Reviewed By: BrokenSoul [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2006 13:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so happy you wrote another chapter! Please keep up the good work. Sasuke returned to Hinata! I was so happy I cried!
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Reviewed By: Evilevergreen [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2006 14:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was very pleased when I saw completed only to get the to bottom of chapter nine and see that it wasn't completed. =( So I traveled on over to aff.net and saw that you already had chapter 10 up over there. I think my favorite line would have to be from chapter 8: I don't secretly lust after my best friend's wife. . . . . . So maybe he was lusting, just a little bit, after his best friend's wife. I cracked up when I read that. Though it does start to make you wonder, why Naruto has stayed single for so long. I mean, are there reasons you keep on bring up his loyality to Sasuke only to turn around and mean that he may have a thing for his wife. I really wish you had played that out more. I think it would have been an interesting road to go down. Anyway, there sure are a lot of twins in your story, but what happen to pair that was hunting down Sasuke? I'm sure the story is long from over. Good luck with it and update soon! =D
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Reviewed By: goodygurrl2010 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2006 20:58 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love ur story but u gota add more!! plz ~Christina~
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Title: awesome
Reviewed By: HIM13 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2006 19:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep Writing
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha360 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2006 12:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome story I love it please finish it soon
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Reviewed By: Ishida Miyako [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2006 19:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You don't know how happy you've made me! The last 3 chapters had my teeth set! I can't wait for the climax!
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