"His Eyes" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Title: Good Ending Reviewed By: Sunshine and puppies On: July 14, 2006 03:18 CDT Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Nicely done.
| Reviewed By: Hiryu Kaga On: May 05, 2006 08:23 CDT Comment/Review: It was quite good. Really. I liked the way you convened the emotions. The only problem seems to be the last paragraph. It's the kind of twist that makes a good story mediocre. Throught the whole fic you'd think that Sakura still didn't care for Naruto, and then we suddenly see them as a couple. No, that doesn't rate high in my books - it's so anticlimactic...
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