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| "Prism of Winter" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Title: If You Give an Android a Drink...
Reviewed By: Sueric [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2006 12:36 CDT
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LOL, I thoroughly enjoyed your latest chapter! Highly entertaining, and I really like "Mike" a lot. She's interesting, and I cannot wait to see what else you do with her. Once more, your sense of understated sense of humor shines here! Another completely enjoyable read!
| Title: Waking
Reviewed By: Sueric [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2006 20:43 CDT
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You have a knack for the dialogue. It really entertained me. I think the relationship is interesting, though I really would have liked to see a little more of it. What you wrote was a bit of a teaser, and it left an impression on me though I hesitate to try to pin down Alex and Mike's relationship based on this. I'd love to read more of it, though! Keep it up, Dumas! You rock! lol!
| Reviewed By: Sueric [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2006 20:30 CDT
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... That is one of the most twisted things I've ever read, Dumas... BAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAA! Great work on this little (and I do mean little) piece! I have to say that your off-balance sense of humor shines in this! Thanks for the laugh!
| Title: Chapter 1
Reviewed By: Custodian Of Dreams [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2006 21:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have a question: the "type" of this story is specified as "songfic" -- of which there is no trace. A mistake, maybe, or are the succeeding stories going to be in that format? Anyway, I loved this first story. Very well-written. The story very clearly expressed the setting and the situation without having to actually resort to potentially boring narration. It's something I'm still struggling to achieve. At the end... lol, the whole thing was funny, suddenly. Nice way to wrap it up. Excellent story -- I really enjoyed it. Take care, and keep writing!
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