| "My Sora Problem" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Title: Pretty good.
Reviewed By: Adrasvaiyen [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2007 23:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was pretty good, I have to admit. but i agree with xaio chan. you don't just go around doin it everywhere. i'm not really into the whole "romance" thing, and especially when it's not kairi sora is with. but surprisingly, ths was enjoyable. pretty funny too. but the ending was a bit to overdone for my tastes. but that's just me. it's alaso good to get something besides yaio once in a while. but keep up the good work!
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Title: uuuum.....
Reviewed By: bobandrews325 On: August 27, 2006 18:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
I have been away for a while now and didn't really get the chance to finish reading this, but when I finally did finish I was like friggin' sweet(oh, I almost forgot. I also wanted to apologize for putting the same review on here twice. I seriously don't know exactly how it happened.) I hope you can write more titles like this in the near future.
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Reviewed By: FFXInuyasha1 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2006 19:46 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice Work! I completely understand the reasons for Tifa leaving Cloud but Cloud was an enigmatic charecter. He doesn't seem like the type to just fall in love (or have sex for that matter) with Aeris (or Aerith if you please). But even though its still good. Keep it up! P.S. Has anyone heard from CrimsonEdge lately?
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Title: ok lot and lots of sex
Reviewed By: kngdmhrtsmaniac On: July 06, 2006 20:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
there was a lot of sex in it but it was ok keep the storie going
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Title: WOW!!!!!!
Reviewed By: bobandrews325 On: July 02, 2006 21:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I never thought anyone would actually write it[yes I expected this]. It really pulled me in with the unique mixture of comedy and romance. PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAASE make more chapters, or else I shall release the wrath of my army of FLYING MONKEYS and 1 sheepdog!!!!!!!!!!Also probably a 6 month old golden lab.
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Reviewed By: bobandrews325 On: June 23, 2006 10:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I never thought anyone would actually write it[yes I expected this]. It really pulled me in with the unique mixture of comedy and romance. PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAASE make more chapters, or else I shall release the wrath of my army of FLYING MONKEYS and 1 sheepdog!!!!!!!!!!Also probably a 6 month old golden lab.
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Reviewed By: Dark Lord Tokunaga [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2006 13:41 CDT
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WRITE NEXT CHAPPIE!!!!!!! I CANT WAIT AND ITS REALLY FUNNY, espesially how yuffie can watch cloud and areith but not leon and megumi.... XD KEEP IT UP!
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Reviewed By: Xaio Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2006 13:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
Good job but what's with the "activites"? Shirtless activities? He he
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Reviewed By: Xaio Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2006 15:30 CDT
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Really good, mmm, torture Yuffie, uh I don't think anyone could do that, but give it your best shot. Nice with the whole Kiari's guns things.
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Reviewed By: Xaio Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2006 08:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay really good, but don't say sex, it makes it seem not so um what's the word I'm looking for, less romantic, seriously. I'm not trying to bash it, I'm actually not into sex outside of marriage, and diffently not on a first date. Any ways, try to use different things, maybe making out before or something. I really do like it though, trying making love instead of sex,k? Keep up the good work. The seven is an average of your two scores, just to let you know. Have a great day.
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Reviewed By: xaio-chan On: May 04, 2006 09:10 CDT
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Strane but very good except now I can't get those freaky images out of my head. I think i need Tifa to knock me out or something. Any ways do write more. :) :) :)
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Reviewed By: Kagome fan 109 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2006 20:00 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS STORY!!! WRITE NEXT CHAPTER SOON!
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