| "Circles" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Desert Rose [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2007 19:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoed this story. There seemed to be a suspenseful quality to it that I liked I hope that you update real soon.
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Title: Saphieralynn
Reviewed By: Saphieralynn [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2007 21:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's great I hope to be able to read more of the story when you put the other chapters up...I'm woundering what you have instore for Kagome and Yuske and know if any of the other members will be brought into the story.
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Reviewed By: Hopelessly Hopefull [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2006 03:04 CST
Comment/Review:
that was amazing, it was just so circular. start and finish started the same and it reminded me fondly of my favourite book, 'of mice and men' in terms of the flow. much love always hope xxx
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Reviewed By: Radetsky_girl On: May 31, 2006 18:46 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
It was good but not perfect. You putted Yusuke as a diferent person but didn't give a reason for him to act like that. You might add it next chapter. You also didn't explain what happend to Inuyasha and the others. You write pretty good keep this fic on I'd like to read more of it.
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Title: Sequel
Reviewed By: Lady Warrior On: May 18, 2006 11:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I havent read a story like this one in a long while. You can really bait a hook. I was so interested that when I found out it was a one-shot I nearly toppled over.Maybe in the future if you can get any inspiration you can continue this. Recently the crossover stories that i have read just become plain stupid and idiotic but yours, you have created very well. If you think about adding on let me know. ok? soccer_mania360@hotmail.com Lady Warrior
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