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Title: THATS IT?!?!
Reviewed By: anime_lover_kohaku [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2006 19:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
you just ended it T-T, i was reading it i got to the end and it is like oh ya thats the last chapter. other than that i LOVED this story oh and btw you had some spelling mistakes its contraction not contraption. anyways good story!
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Title: please update
Reviewed By: anime_lover_kohaku [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2006 06:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story, thank you so much for writing it. Hiei is usually shown as a moody keep away from me type of person but you showed him to be loving and kind and me being a hiei fan love that. I also love how protective kurama is that is so much like the kurama in the show and manga. I sat down and read this whole sotry tonight, PLEASE update i would really really really like to know what is doing to happen with Hiei and the baby. I love your writing ang the story please hurry and continue!
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Reviewed By: mindfreak [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2006 17:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
mmmk. Loved it. I like the emotional side to Hiei that many don't get the chance to see. It's actually kinda neat. The only thing you need to work on would be spelling and that's only by a little bit. Remember, no flames here. I don't need any tears coming my way. Besides, the work is simply too good for a flame. tootles. ps: update! update!update! update!update! update!update! update!update! update!update! update!update! update!update! update!update! update!
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Reviewed By: hellcat805 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2006 18:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awsome fic as always...i suck at reviewing
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Reviewed By: hellcat805 On: June 28, 2006 12:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
next update!!!
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Title: great chapter
Reviewed By: eggs On: June 09, 2006 04:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow what a chapter and Hiei manage to make it back with out being kidnapped or the Koorime discovering about the baby add more now now and hurry thanks Jessica
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Title: great chapter
Reviewed By: Hopehead On: June 06, 2006 17:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow what a chapter I wonder what will happen next Hiei needs to eat more and he's always tired he'll be find add more now now and hurry thanks Jessica
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Title: great chapter
Reviewed By: mewcow On: June 06, 2006 06:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chapter two and half months until the baby comes add more now now
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Title: great chapter
Reviewed By: hope4 On: June 05, 2006 17:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chapter yukina finally knows the truth wonder what will happen next????????
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Reviewed By: mizaminer [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2006 21:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wtire moer please!
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Reviewed By: toasterwoman360 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2006 14:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Title: review for both chapters
Reviewed By: BOOHURTS On: May 26, 2006 06:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow great two chapters hope Kurama Hiei stay together I know Hiei is scared he fears he's getting to fat he'll be fine wonder about Yukina will he tell her how will the others react add more now now
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: dearest On: May 23, 2006 06:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow hiei was almost taken by the koorime luckily kurama didn't let that happen i wonder what will happen next add more now
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Title: great
Reviewed By: Rosenight On: May 16, 2006 20:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow another great chapter loved it when Hiei got scared and ran away upstairs that he was whimpering he is cute and sensitive now that he's pregnant add more now now and hurry thanks Jessica
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Title: great chapter again
Reviewed By: frighten On: May 14, 2006 16:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow great chapter now Kurama knows about the baby how will the gang react add more now now and hurry thanks
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