| "One messed up wish" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: Rogue On: March 27, 2002 21:35 CST
Comment/Review:
Pretty good so far. I like the fact that Kakarotto isn't evil, just more like Vegeta. Keep it coming. |
Reviewed By: Papa Bear On: March 25, 2002 17:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good job so far, I like it! Espeacially the idea of Kakarott being tortured the first day back! |
Reviewed By: Bulma Angel On: March 25, 2002 06:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is awesome get the next cchapter up soon!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Ursula On: March 21, 2002 11:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's a very cute story, I enjoyed it and hope you continue with it. Your usage of grammer and the occasional to instead of too or vice versa sticks out, but we can't all be obsessive about grammer structure, can we?
Otherwise, it's great and I hope you contine to post stories. I know it can be time consuming and sometimes frustrating, but with talent like yours I'm sure it would be worth it! |
Reviewed By: angelryodo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2002 16:21 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it so far so keep it up.And no chapter 1 did not suck. |
Reviewed By: Scotty 2010 On: March 20, 2002 07:09 CST
Comment/Review:
this one starts pretty good, i look forward to reading any extensions to it |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2002 00:10 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is very good and very original! I like. Please write more!-JB |
Reviewed By: cosmicvegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2002 22:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Most of the time I don't like Goku Chi-CHi stuff... but this I really like a lot. It's funny how Kakkortto always wants to score with Chi-chan but no! Please write more! |
