| "Never Ending Miracle" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] |
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Reviewed By: Destenyne [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2008 19:15 CDT
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ARE YOU THERE?!!!!!!!! HELLO!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Come On!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Destenyne [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2008 18:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Come on! No! Keep writing what are you thinking?! Okay if you quit can you write a Hinata/Naruto or Shizune/Tsunade. Something? Oh and I need help with my fic. Please contact me somehow. Send pidgeons if you have to. Billions of pidgeons...and a turkey.
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Title: Llamas, chickens, squirrels, penguins, and frogs all eating my nose
Reviewed By: Destenyne [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2007 15:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
1 I'm sooooooooooooooooo glad ylu finally updated. 2 if you stop writing without making a sequels I will hunt you down. Elmo knows where you live!
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Reviewed By: itachi-sama15 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2007 23:46 CDT
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wow.... Poor sasuke!!! Well sakura lives that's a good thing i guess. I'm not really a sakura and sasuke fan but i like this one!! ^_^ Keep it up!!!! Your awesome!!!
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: wolfram01 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2007 23:06 CDT
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wow.. it made me hold my breathe in suspence!!!! You shoulld have sakura alive for at least sasuke's happines so he won't cry anymore!!
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2007 19:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this fic. PLEASE UPDATE IT SOON!!! IT ROCKS!!!! you're the best!!! I think you should let Sakura live.
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Title: Where are you?
Reviewed By: Destenyne [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2007 18:36 CDT
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You haven't added anything in forever. Come on write more.
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Reviewed By: uzumakiSHOUYA232 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2007 18:49 CDT
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WRITE MORE PLZ????^-^
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Reviewed By: itachi-sama15 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2007 07:24 CDT
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Holy cow! what a dramatic ending for sakura or is it?! Please let Itachi know that me and friends find him being mean in this story!!! The story is awesome and please keep writing more. Good Luck
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Reviewed By: shawnamm1 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2007 03:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow nice twist. It's kinda hard to tell which brother is alive. All in all it's still pretty awsome!:D
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Title: oops
Reviewed By: Destenyne [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2007 11:27 CST
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that was an idea for the ending. Cows Quack!
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Reviewed By: Destenyne [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2007 11:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Itachi laid Sasuke's lifeless body at Sakura's feet. She forced herself to keep a blank stare though rage burned within her. "Tell me little cherry blossom. Does this anger you? Sakura shook her head slowly. "I know you're lying. Tell me the truth." Sakura nodded slowly as a tear ran down her face. "Do you loathe me, detest me? Do you hate me?" Sakura answered weakly "yes." "Do you wish me dead?" Yes! You killed Sasuke! My Sasuke! If it takes me the rest of my life I swear I'll destroy you. YOU BASTARD!" Itachi simply laughed "You say this and yet you came to me. You let me have you. You no longer resist me. Your life is mine." Sakura head fell. He was right. She had aloud him to have her. She had come back to him. "You understand Sakura? You belong to me now." He laid her down by Sasuke. She made no effort to resist. He began to slide of her clothes. His fingers gently caressing her soft skin as he slid her bra off. He took his time with her panties letting her feel every inch as they were removed. He removed his shorts and lowered himself onto her. As he slid himself into her. Her hand reached for her kunai pouch. He may of taken Sasuke from her but he would never have her again. "Die Itachi!" with a scream of rage she drove her kunai into his shoulder. "Wench! You'll pay for that!" He raises his hand to strike Sakura but is stopped mid swing. He slowly turns his head only to see his brother. "S-sasuke? No, I watched you die. I killed you myself." "No you got sloppy. You should of done as thorough a job with me as you did with our clan." He grabs and throws Itachi. "How dare you use me to torture Sakura." When Itachi returns to his feet he begins Barrage of Lions. He kicks him once "This is for our clan!" He punches him "This is for our parents, and this is for Sakura! Barrage of Lions!" Sasuke kicks Itachi into the ground. Itachi stands. Blood drips from his mouth. "Not bad but not near enough. However luck is on your idea this is not where you'll die." Itachi breaks for the exit but Naruto's shadow clones stop him. "I'll tear this jutsu apart in seconds." "I wouldn't recommend that" points to explosive tags "unless you can survive a twenty man kamikaze. Take him down Sasuke!" "Planning on it! Phoenix Flower Jutsu!" Itachi blocks flames "Pathetic Sasuke just pathetic!" He grabs Sasuke by the throat and hurls him into a wall. Sasuke's cursed mark activates. "No I don't need his power!" Sasuke suppresses then shatters the cursed mark. "Foolish brother with that you could of saved them. Now you'll all die. You and the blonde kid will go quick. As for Sakura, well, a women's a terrible thing to waste. When I'm not playing with her fragile body I can always use Tsukiyomi and play with her mind, but first there's the matter of the sneak attack. I didn't like that. I wonder if she'll like some senbon through hose cute soft breasts. Oh yes. We're going to have lots of fun me and my cherry blossom." "She is not your cherry blossom you sick son of a bitch!" Sasuke looks up revealing Magekyo Sharingan. "NO! Impossible!" "Naruto I'm borrowing your catchphrase. It's possible Itachi. Believe it. Amaterasu!" Itachi is consumed by black flames. Sasuke scoops Sakura up and they go home. Submitted by Midnyte's biggest fan. THERE CAN ONLY BE ONE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: shawnamm1 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2006 03:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
chapter 8 was pretty good. can't wait for the next chapter.
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Title: Blasted
Reviewed By: Reeve On: December 03, 2006 16:06 CST
Comment/Review:
Really really adictive style of writing. Really really loved it! Please update!
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Reviewed By: yukibozu On: November 20, 2006 18:38 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
whoa....that was short....but im happy you updated!!!!
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