| "Oh...Crap..." Reviews/Comments [ 57 ] |
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Title: Damn... *Sniff* ;-;
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: June 17, 2006 09:31 CDT
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Im not angry, a bit disapointed that I wont get to see the end but I understand that it is your religion and I totally support you! Though I dont think being gay is an abomination, I think love is love but thats just my opinion, I tend to be open minded ^^; I will miss this story though, I wish I coulda seen the way you woulda ended it >< Much Wuv! Passing Reader~
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Title: Very Nice
Reviewed By: Hells_gatekepper [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2006 22:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved your writing. I think it had the element of action, romance in a fun way, and overall, it was just a good read. I love how you portrayed Bakura and Marik as something besides pure evil. And Atemu wasn't a total jerk, major good point for me. Can't wait to see what happens next. Maybe you can enlighten me on some of mine with your talents. ^_~
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Reviewed By: RyousGirl567 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2006 21:30 CDT
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I am amazed at the nice mix of plot and random comedy. Very well done. A little iffy on the grammar/spelling/etc., but I can overlook that when the story is good enough. ^_~ Very cute and original story idea. I can't wait until you post the next chappie! ^_^ It's been quite a while since I've found a new YGO story that I like. Makes me happy inside. ^_^ If you like comedy, I have a comedy fic of my own. I also have a story that starts out angsty for the first two chappies and then has either a sad or happy ending (you choose which chappie to read). The happy ending has Malik and Marik(u) in it. ^_~ Well, happy writings and I hope to see more from you soon! ~Tori-chan~
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Title: The damn things broke I tell you!!!!! I dient get any of my review in the last one!!!! >< Basicly worshiping you *sigh* Damn thing *Mutters*
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: June 08, 2006 23:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
Read Title, this is a usless pice of @#$&!!! >:(
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Title: Ouuuub
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: June 08, 2006 23:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Title: I want more ;-;
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: May 30, 2006 17:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I reviewed, so now you havta love me forever muahahaha!!! j/k Hehe, I got so excited when you updated I jumped up and down >< I thought Marik(u) would have been too impationt to wait 4 days just like I am for your next update ^^' and thx for replying to the reviews! Makes me feel special :D Cant wait till your next update!!!! Ja ne! XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX
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Reviewed By: Tjay_Motou(NLI) On: May 18, 2006 07:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You need to work on you're grammar... if you don't have a beta, get one, if you do... get a different one. I like the plot idea but the characterizations are... different and vague. You could add some more detail... However overall I liked the fic... and please don't take this as a flame, its just some things you should work on to better you're writing.
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Title: It cut off, Basicly I was worshiping you ^^' Dident wanna make the message 2 long
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: May 16, 2006 19:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry, Please update! ;-; This things not working XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX
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Title: LOVE IT!!!!!
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: May 16, 2006 19:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I knew this was going to be a good story!!! It just keeps getting better and better with each chapter, and its so suspensful!!! XD You left me at a cliffhanger ;-; now I havta wonder whats gonna happen till you update and its gonna drive me crazy >
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Reviewed By: sympa On: May 16, 2006 13:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
:) I like the beginning ^^ I added this fic to my bookmarks, and I'll definitely wait for the next chapters. Sorry for my crappy English, I'm German *lol*
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Title: Beautimus!!!!
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: May 14, 2006 21:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it!!! Well, the beging anyway ^^' I can tell that this is gonna be one hell of a story though, please update!!! XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX
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Title: It's Sour... I like it! ^^
Reviewed By: Sour Akio offline On: May 09, 2006 22:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
Sour here! ...^^ I liked the intro! Please continue soon!
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