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Reviewed By: mystralwind [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2008 15:34 CST
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ok, You know you really want to update this, I know I do. lolz Please?? with cookies??
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Title: Oh Crap
Reviewed By: mystralwind [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2008 03:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh Crap is so right! One thing after another. I bet Malik is just wishing that Nasad had told the pharaoh he was dead, or pulled off the family thing for a day and then left. "We need to go home now, see you again soon maybe?" Isis and Mana could have worked stuff out while the boys stayed at the lair. I loved all of it, every last detail played right into the eventual cannon series. LOL Seth wanting Namu is hawt@!!!! Please continue this, it was great; really!!!
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Title: I LOVE it.
Reviewed By: Youshiie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2007 12:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story, Please update soon, i cant wait. OH dear, Whats going to happen? I hate cliff hangers but i love your story. Actually its my favorite story so please update!!! Please update as soon as possible!!!!
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Reviewed By: RyousGirl567 (nli) On: May 06, 2007 13:44 CDT
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Hey! Long time no read! Oh well, it was still a great chapter. ^_^ Things aren't moving too quickly, btw. I see you've explored more relationships/rivalries/foeships. Gyah, I get so mad at Atemu for taking advantage of Malik! >.< He's a meanie (even if he thinks it's pure)! But you prtray a kind of "innocent evil" in him well. Gets us readers to hate him, yet understand where he's coming from. I know this sounds kinda naggy, but I would really like to see the MahadoxMana idea explored. Again, it is essential to the plot line. And that coupling is so kawaii! ^_^ Well, happy writings! ~Tori-chan~
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Reviewed By: Jaims [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2007 10:12 CDT
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Ah, I LOVE this fic!! so happy you updated!!! uh, is seth supposed to know that bakura goes by billah? cause I thought he was 'ryou' in the palace? maybe I'm confused. Oh, the seth/namu thing is very interesting, but of course MM is my favorite! drama drama. you're an excellent writer. keep it coming!!
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Reviewed By: Nyami Rose On: February 01, 2007 17:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
*kisses you* All's forgiven. Sorry for being such B*tch. ^_^" PLZ continue!!! -Nyami
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Reviewed By: YuniMasa [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2007 03:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok first off sorry, I didn't post a review on any of the other chapters. Anyway This was a great chapter. I liked the way you jumped back and forth between seens.It's also cool that it's in Ancient Egypt. I love AU fics but uh that's just me. I also thought it was befitting the way Bakura greeted Malik when he came into the room. Though I was a bit surprised that Marik didn't get a bit upset with Malik then he did. I mean his love did cheat on him but I guess it doesn't matter that much. It was really funny when Marik called Bakura "Mr. Man Whore" I could of died laughing at that part. Also the very end was cute/funny too. Well over all I like this fan fiction, it really good, and humorous. Keep up the good writing.
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Reviewed By: RyousGirl567 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2007 11:53 CST
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Yet another great installment in the unfolding story. I know it was a filler chapter, but it developed relationships and wrapped up the "first step" in the plan. You've developed Bakura quite well. He seems to be growing in character. I'm glad that Mariku was so forgiving 'cause I feel so bad for Malik. That must have been quite an ordeal, especially pretending the feelings were mutual. I wonder if the relatoinship between Mahado and Mana will be explored a bit. ^_~ Well, considering Mahado is the posessor of the Ring, that would be most essential to the plot line. I look forward to the start of my next season, considering it's but 2 months away. ^_^ Yeah, MB becomes life after a while. Congrats on your growing list of consistent reviewers which I am proud to be a part of. Keep up the great work and I can't wait for more to come! ^_^ Happy writings! ~Tori-chan~ P.S. Good job with the in between time. Keep at it and you won't turn into me. ^^;;; *sigh*
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Reviewed By: Tjay Motou [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2007 21:27 CST
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hahaha.. well I'm not sure what to say since I edited it... soo... good job...
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Title: Chapter 13
Reviewed By: Tjay Motou [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2006 01:55 CST
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Oh My GOD! That is just wrong! Just Wrong! Malik can't cheat on Mariku... he just can't... just can't!! *runs off in tears* But this chapter was soo well written *gushes* Amazing! you really out did yourself... I'm impressed. Sorry for like the 300 reviews... but I review most of them... I have you a few breaks. soo... enjoy reading my reviews and I'll be waiting for the next chapter. I can't wait.
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Title: Chapter 12
Reviewed By: Tjay Motou [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2006 01:41 CST
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Um... Malik/Seth? ARE YOU CRAZY????? Still a good chapter, you're imporving a lot. Good... no GREAT Job. *gives you a gold star*
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Title: Chapter 11
Reviewed By: Tjay Motou [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2006 01:27 CST
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soo the Yami's didn't exist... but they will now? how... evil... It's all making sence now... haha... Bakura/Malik... is odd... I'm sorry... but it's odd.
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Title: Chatper 10 Review
Reviewed By: Tjay Motou [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2006 01:18 CST
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That was just funny... but Atemu called Namu "Malik"... which was odd... you may want to fix that when you get around to it.
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Title: Review for Chapter 9
Reviewed By: Tjay Motou [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2006 01:02 CST
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Are you getting tried of reading these? are you to the point of email me and telling me to stop reviewing? either way I'm not stopping... Nice lemon... nice... a bit short... but lemon... lemon... me love lemon... lemon... *drools on keyboard and ruins it*
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Title: Review for Chapter 8
Reviewed By: Tjay Motou [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2006 00:54 CST
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soo... Yami Bakura and Yami Marik don't exist... okay... works for me. by the way... Ryou's sister name is... not that... I would tell you hoewever my version of the Manga is very very in correct and I'm too lazy to look it up... anyways Good job... off to chapter 9
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