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| "Creme de la Creme" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: rikus baby girl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2006 18:28 CST
Comment/Review:
hey!all in all it wasnt bad!!my best friend urged me not 2 read this cuz she thought that i would get med!but like i ever listen 2 her!!lol!!well i gosta put the g 2 the o!cuz this girl gosta GO!! luv, rikus baby girl p.s. riku and sora aint gay!riku is straight and sora is just bisexual!!roxas & axel are gay lovers!& they make a cute couple!!but i still luved ur story!!e-mail me @ cali_layla@yahoo.com or laylacali_69@yahoo.com.if u want that is!!
| Title: fast...
Reviewed By: PeachLove [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2006 13:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm... Being the self-proclaimed Riku x Sora expert that I am, I say this was quite a delicious fic. It's definitely a nice smut read, if not too deep. Although, I would warn you to beware of cliched sayings in the middle of sex and to slow it down just a bit and put in more foreplay. Also... *sniff, sniff* They hardly touched the sweets that poor Riku worked so hard on... I would have eaten that chocolate if they had asked...
| Title: WOW
Reviewed By: lovagirlalot [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2006 01:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
0_0WOW......All i could say was...WOW.........Beginning...WOW.....Middle...Wow...Middle... WOW.........Middle..........WOW........Middle.....WOW........End..... WOW.....End.........WOW........review.........WOW. if riku wasn't my brother i'd be jealous.
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