Title: FFRG Reviewed By: Dee-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2006 10:56 CDT Comment/Review: This first chapter is a little short and unfocused I think. It began well enough, but ended abruptly and I had to wonder if there was any planning for this first chapter. This first chapter was great grammatical and spelling-wise however, because as far as I saw, there weren't any errors. Best wishes with the writing! I hope that the next chapter of Unscripted comes out soon! Thank you for submitting to FFRG. --Dee
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