| "Finally Complete" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Title: WRITE MORE
Reviewed By: Tetsu Shatarii [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2007 00:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU NEED TO WRITE MORE!!!!! THIS IS SOOO GOOD!!!!
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Reviewed By: flashgriffin On: April 13, 2007 14:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good Work, hot.:)
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Reviewed By: eka On: January 27, 2007 22:37 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sequel, please. x]
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Reviewed By: VcChick On: September 15, 2006 17:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was hot! lol it was extremely erotic lol --VC
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Title: AAAHHHHH
Reviewed By: Jelly [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2006 04:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you so left that opend for more so why do you have it as a one shot when you have to write more?! or I mite die! I love your writing stile your so going under fav. oh and did I tell you that your going to write more? you have to!!!!!!!! I love this fic it one of the best naruto fics so far. and thats seying somthing caz I'v read a love of naruto fic's.
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Reviewed By: !)ark Machine On: August 08, 2006 17:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok. I'm a guy. A manly guy, and I never thought I'd read a fic where two guys kissing would be hot. Well... congrats, you wrote that fic. And I'd love to see more of it. It's well written with good readability and description and I'd love to see where you could take it. Please give us more.
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Reviewed By: !)ark Machine On: August 08, 2006 17:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok. I'm a guy. A manly guy, and I never thought I'd read a fic where two guys kissing would be hot. Well... congrats, you wrote that fic. And I'd love to see more of it. It's well written with good readability and description and I'd love to see where you could take it. Please give us more.
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Reviewed By: GrayBear32 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2006 13:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well done. I would Like to see If you could evelope more along this storyline
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Reviewed By: fLcL_FFx_lovr [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2006 14:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
write more!!!! write more!!!
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Reviewed By: Unknown Being On: May 27, 2006 23:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
Continue Please, I Quite Like it. Ha, I love it.
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Reviewed By: Jadehaku On: May 18, 2006 01:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just love threesomes with team 7(^-^) Please continue with the story! bring on that smut
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Reviewed By: Morwen Re On: May 10, 2006 21:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
dang! that was good! i loved the way you did it and i hope that you do write a few more chapters, such as one that explains what the hell sasuke was talking about to naruto at the end of the fic about a plan? please, please write another chapter! if you do, i'll give you a cookie!
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Reviewed By: leila-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2006 14:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
very hot. i like that sasuke answered her with a kiss(about liking girls 'that' way) so cute that they all were thinking the same thing. you did a great job on this. you broke my naruto 3some cherry. well done.
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Title: Okey Dokey
Reviewed By: ShadowLilly [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2006 05:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NO responses yet, so I'm gonna make my own. Criticism is welcomed, because it gives a writer a place to begin fixing and bettering their story. Which is what I would like to see and do.
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