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| "Torn Existence" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] | | Pages (2): [ « ‹ 1 2 ] | Reviewed By: Black_wolf10 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2006 03:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello again, and GREAT chapter!! It was a tad confusing at first, but the end cleared some things up. So... she's half human and half humunuli? MAJOR TWIST!!!! I NEVER EXPECTED THAT!!! WOW! I still can't get over it that you're writting the sequel to the best story EVER!!! *squeals* PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
| Reviewed By: Black_wolf10 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2006 18:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, I read the chapters, and they were THE GREATEST!!!!!! THIS STORY IS GOING TO BE SOOOO AWESOME!!!!!!!! The only question I have is, Marie is back, but why is there also a humunculus too????? Did Ed bring back Marie and create a humunculus also???????? PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!
| Reviewed By: Black_wolf10 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2006 18:12 EDT
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OMG!!!!!! I don't have enough words to describe how happy I feel right now!!!!!!! I'm sorry I havent reviewed sooner, but I had Relay For Life, and I didn't get any sleep.... BUT, I'M SOOOOO HAPPY THAT YOU MADE A SEQUEL!!!!! Funny thing is, I haven't read the chapter yet, I really needed to review first, dunno why. But I can't wait to read it, so now I'm gonna' do just that! THANKS SOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH!!!!!!
| Title: AAAAAAAHHHHH!!!
Reviewed By: AcidGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2006 14:24 EDT
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THE SEQUEL!!! THE SEQUEL!!! *squeezes and hugs!* You made it!!! Thank you for listening to your peeps!! Your story's awesome!!! And I'm the SECOND one to review!!! I'm so happy!! (This is the highlight of the day for me sorry -_-') But anyway I heart you!!! ^_^
| Reviewed By: Her Ink Stain On: May 06, 2006 12:53 EDT
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Ah! The long awaited sequel, though I didn't have to wait too long... Anyway, I like where it's going, so keep them coming and keep up the good work!
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