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Reviewed By: Jessica R. On: December 08, 2012 22:10 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's so rare to find a new story that totally captivates. I hope you don't give up on this, it's enthralling |
Title: dangit
Reviewed By: 3HierCiel On: April 08, 2010 03:54 EDT
Comment/Review:
*twitches eye* Sorry.
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Title: My Long Review~Revised
Reviewed By: 3HierCiel On: April 08, 2010 03:52 EDT
Comment/Review:
Eh, so I see that the formatting for my review is not satisfactory. So here it is again, fixed: Please update! I enjoyed Marie x Edward in D or D? but now that Edward is all mopey and obsessed, not so much. Now apathetic Marie x Envy seems good too. (Envy has a nice side!!) It's interesting to see the other side of the rainbow; the homonculus side. Well, as you can infer from my review, I would like either normal Marie x Edward without any of the mushy dramatics or half-homonculus Marie x Envy. But that's just me. I also have an account at Lunaes-however-you spell it. I was going to suggest writing the ending for you (to D or D?) since it's incomplete but then two things occurred: 1) I realized I probably can't match your level of creativity in plot development. 2)I found this website. =) But maybe writing some drabbles about Marie x Envy sounds good right now. PS. SPOILER** How could Marie just get shot like that in D or D? Not cool. Hope the formatting works. If it doesn't, sorry for spamming.
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Title: My Long Review~Revised
Reviewed By: 3HierCiel On: April 08, 2010 03:52 EDT
Comment/Review:
Eh, so I see that the formatting for my review is not satisfactory. So here it is again, fixed: Please update! I enjoyed Marie x Edward in D or D? but now that Edward is all mopey and obsessed, not so much. Now apathetic Marie x Envy seems good too. (Envy has a nice side!!) It's interesting to see the other side of the rainbow; the homonculus side. Well, as you can infer from my review, I would like either normal Marie x Edward without any of the mushy dramatics or half-homonculus Marie x Envy. But that's just me. I also have an account at Lunaes-however-you spell it. I was going to suggest writing the ending for you (to D or D?) since it's incomplete but then two things occurred: 1) I realized I probably can't match your level of creativity in plot development. 2)I found this website. =) But maybe writing some drabbles about Marie x Envy sounds good right now. PS. SPOILER** How could Marie just get shot like that in D or D? Not cool. Hope the formatting works. If it doesn't, sorry for spamming.
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Title: My Long Review
Reviewed By: 3HierCiel On: April 08, 2010 03:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update! I enjoyed Marie x Edward in D or D? but now that Edward is all mopey and obsessed, not so much. Now apathetic Marie x Envy seems good too. (Envy has a nice side!!) It's interesting to see the other side of the rainbow; the homonculus side. Well, as you can infer from my review, I would like either normal Marie x Edward without any of the mushy dramatics or half-homonculus Marie x Envy. But that's just me. I also have an account at Lunaes-however-you spell it. I was going to suggest writing the ending for you (to D or D?) since it's incomplete but then two things occurred: 1) I realized I probably can't match your level of creativity in plot development. 2)I found this website. =) But maybe writing some drabbles about Marie x Envy sounds good right now. PS. SPOILER** How could Marie just get shot like that in D or D? Not cool.
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Reviewed By: hiya24 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2007 00:13 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have done such a great job, you made me cry at the end of the other and now I'm about to again. Please update, I'm giving puppy-dog eyes and think I'll go insane if you don't soon. I love your characters and your style. I also love the fact that you know how to spell and you know what proper gramer is (even if I don't). One more plea for an update and that's all till then =)
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Title: AWESOME!!!
Reviewed By: Mononoke Dreamer [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2007 19:58 EST
Comment/Review:
I'm sooooo happy you updated!! THANK YOU! I thought you had forgotten about it... Anyway, amazing chapter! I can't wait till you updait again!
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Reviewed By: Mononoke Dreamer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2007 23:48 EST
Comment/Review:
This is really Black_wolf10, just to let ya know. Why havent you updated in so long? I really miss your amazing stories.
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Reviewed By: Serena1700 On: November 04, 2006 03:54 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its me agian. Heh. ^^; I really love your work! You have to let me know if you start back up on this or if you start on anything else. You rules! Keep it up! >.
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Reviewed By: Mian(not logged in) On: July 01, 2006 17:20 EDT
Comment/Review:
Hey, I have an idea! Make Marie start falling in love with Ed all over again but make her fall in love with Envy, too! Sh*it, the hentai side of my brain is taking over. No! Bad thoughts! BAD thoughts! Get out of my head, you pervert! Great, I just had a mental image of Marie getting screwed by both Ed and Envy at the same time. Ewwwwwww. . .
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Title: AHHH!
Reviewed By: AcidGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2006 12:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are so good at making stories! I envy you! You have such good skills! I wanna find out what happens next!!! Its so good!!!
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Reviewed By: Kitani [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2006 16:11 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh man, I can't believe they were going to make her kill Fletcher! That's so not cool! I hope Ed and Russell figure the whole thing out. Please update again, I'll be waiting. Summer's Here!!!
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Reviewed By: Black_wolf10 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2006 20:19 EDT
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OMG!! Ed now knows the truth!!! What are you going to do!?!?!? Great chapter!! THANKS! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: lord sesshomaru2 On: May 24, 2006 19:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I cannot wait until your next update, i think itll end up keeping awake for days waiting for the next chapter
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Reviewed By: Kitani [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2006 16:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You've started the sequel! That's so awesome!!! Whoo! I love the way you're starting out on this one. The twists and turns are already starting and I'm loving it! I feel bad for Ed, though, but its a good thing Al's there for him. I'm way excited you're writing again. Please update!
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