| "Torn Existence" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Reviewed By: hiya24 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2007 00:13 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have done such a great job, you made me cry at the end of the other and now I'm about to again. Please update, I'm giving puppy-dog eyes and think I'll go insane if you don't soon. I love your characters and your style. I also love the fact that you know how to spell and you know what proper gramer is (even if I don't). One more plea for an update and that's all till then =)
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Title: AWESOME!!!
Reviewed By: Mononoke Dreamer [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2007 19:58 EST
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I'm sooooo happy you updated!! THANK YOU! I thought you had forgotten about it... Anyway, amazing chapter! I can't wait till you updait again!
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Reviewed By: Mononoke Dreamer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2007 23:48 EST
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This is really Black_wolf10, just to let ya know. Why havent you updated in so long? I really miss your amazing stories.
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Reviewed By: Serena1700 On: November 04, 2006 03:54 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its me agian. Heh. ^^; I really love your work! You have to let me know if you start back up on this or if you start on anything else. You rules! Keep it up! >.
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Reviewed By: Mian(not logged in) On: July 01, 2006 17:20 EDT
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Hey, I have an idea! Make Marie start falling in love with Ed all over again but make her fall in love with Envy, too! Sh*it, the hentai side of my brain is taking over. No! Bad thoughts! BAD thoughts! Get out of my head, you pervert! Great, I just had a mental image of Marie getting screwed by both Ed and Envy at the same time. Ewwwwwww. . .
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Title: AHHH!
Reviewed By: AcidGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2006 12:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are so good at making stories! I envy you! You have such good skills! I wanna find out what happens next!!! Its so good!!!
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Reviewed By: Kitani [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2006 16:11 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh man, I can't believe they were going to make her kill Fletcher! That's so not cool! I hope Ed and Russell figure the whole thing out. Please update again, I'll be waiting. Summer's Here!!!
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Reviewed By: Black_wolf10 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2006 20:19 EDT
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OMG!! Ed now knows the truth!!! What are you going to do!?!?!? Great chapter!! THANKS! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: lord sesshomaru2 On: May 24, 2006 19:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I cannot wait until your next update, i think itll end up keeping awake for days waiting for the next chapter
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Reviewed By: Kitani [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2006 16:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You've started the sequel! That's so awesome!!! Whoo! I love the way you're starting out on this one. The twists and turns are already starting and I'm loving it! I feel bad for Ed, though, but its a good thing Al's there for him. I'm way excited you're writing again. Please update!
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Reviewed By: Black_wolf10 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2006 03:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello again, and GREAT chapter!! It was a tad confusing at first, but the end cleared some things up. So... she's half human and half humunuli? MAJOR TWIST!!!! I NEVER EXPECTED THAT!!! WOW! I still can't get over it that you're writting the sequel to the best story EVER!!! *squeals* PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Black_wolf10 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2006 18:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, I read the chapters, and they were THE GREATEST!!!!!! THIS STORY IS GOING TO BE SOOOO AWESOME!!!!!!!! The only question I have is, Marie is back, but why is there also a humunculus too????? Did Ed bring back Marie and create a humunculus also???????? PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Black_wolf10 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2006 18:12 EDT
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OMG!!!!!! I don't have enough words to describe how happy I feel right now!!!!!!! I'm sorry I havent reviewed sooner, but I had Relay For Life, and I didn't get any sleep.... BUT, I'M SOOOOO HAPPY THAT YOU MADE A SEQUEL!!!!! Funny thing is, I haven't read the chapter yet, I really needed to review first, dunno why. But I can't wait to read it, so now I'm gonna' do just that! THANKS SOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH!!!!!!
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Title: AAAAAAAHHHHH!!!
Reviewed By: AcidGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2006 14:24 EDT
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THE SEQUEL!!! THE SEQUEL!!! *squeezes and hugs!* You made it!!! Thank you for listening to your peeps!! Your story's awesome!!! And I'm the SECOND one to review!!! I'm so happy!! (This is the highlight of the day for me sorry -_-') But anyway I heart you!!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Her Ink Stain On: May 06, 2006 12:53 EDT
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Ah! The long awaited sequel, though I didn't have to wait too long... Anyway, I like where it's going, so keep them coming and keep up the good work!
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