| "Frieza's music" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: akito_sweet_insanity [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2008 02:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The references to music threw me quite a bit, and I didn't really think the sarcastic, informal tone matched Vegeta, but the plot was fascinating. I felt so sorry for him. This is probably one of the most disturbing rape fics I've ever read--probably because of his level of detachment and even amusement at the situation, and how he could predict exactly how everything would happen. You did an excellent job painting that very bleak scenario and making the reader feel how hopeless Vegeta must have felt. All in all, it was quite inspiring and I'm impressed.
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Reviewed By: ss10009 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2006 18:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Beautiful. Excellent depiction. Great comparison. Two thumbs up.
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Reviewed By: vegetachik7 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2006 13:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow....this is an amazing and extremely sad story. You certainly know your music and you used it perfectly throughout the story. What an original and amazing way to depict a scene that is so horrid and terrifying. It was beautiful and brutal at the same time. Good work.
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