| "From Geisha to Pack Priestess" Reviews/Comments [ 73 ] |
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Reviewed By: Rinlover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2006 16:15 EDT
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O_O.......NOOOOOOOOO! HOW COULD YOU?!*dies* Please update soon...
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Reviewed By: your bro On: June 07, 2006 15:59 EDT
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yo cool fic sis
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Title: Keep um coming
Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2006 01:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so loving the story, but hey please hurry and get to some sango and miroku interaction.
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Reviewed By: fluffykiara (im like never logged in...lol) On: June 06, 2006 18:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ohhh great update!!^^ i cant wait to find out what happens next... i have never seem memoirs of a geshia so think this story is really good even if its based on it but it doesnt seem to be too much on it...srry the review suxs but i just came back from driving school and am a little out of it... 8 hours of school in 1 day.... 6 normal 2 driving school...
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Reviewed By: inuewaruika* On: June 05, 2006 17:35 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very well written please update soon!
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Reviewed By: North On: June 02, 2006 16:17 EDT
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yo
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Reviewed By: Rinlover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2006 22:12 EDT
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I like this chapter it was good. But there are a few bones I would like to pick. For starters, the characters emotions are too much of a roller coaster. Emotions should be like this: ~~~~~ not like this: /\/\/\/\/\/\ You're making the emotions change waaaaay to fast, or just too immediate. Its very unrealistic unless they're susposed to be bipolar or have multiple personalities. Other than that, I loved this chapter, and it was great, and Inuyasha should mate with Kagome soon! *cough*hint*Cough* Ciao! Update soon please!
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Title: Great!
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2006 21:23 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. Damned shop-keepers tho. With all Kagome went through, and Inu knows she lieing, I wonder what he'll have to say/do to the lot of them over it. Cant wait til next time. Update when you can.
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Reviewed By: Lady Orange [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2006 21:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooooooo jucy cuteness! Their relationship is so sweet! I already wrote a 50 line review today so no criticizem is left to give. Thank you for writing this,.........Lady Orange
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Title: Dan
Reviewed By: azukina14 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2006 18:44 EDT
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yo
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Reviewed By: Zelix (Not signed in) On: June 01, 2006 18:36 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool, this fic is getting better and better! I really love how you write your fics... and now, when you mentioned that Trinity is here too, hehehe, can't wait for the moment you introduce her to this story, i just can't wait. Anyways, excellent fic, keep it up!
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Title: VARY GOOD!!!!
Reviewed By: demonwitch [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2006 13:38 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed this fic alot! it has a origonal plot line and great imagry. please keep writing and get the next chapter out soon. thanks! byes
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Reviewed By: Moonlight_Sky On: May 30, 2006 05:22 EDT
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its very interesting hope that you update soon. I would really like to see what happens next. :D
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Reviewed By: Rinlover [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2006 19:09 EDT
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Oooo,they're even sharing a room now. Hehehehehehe...When will they be sharing underwear? Lol, update soon!
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Reviewed By: Me0.0 On: May 29, 2006 15:56 EDT
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This is an kool story i was waiting for someone to write something about a geshia (yay) well update soon!! byee
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