| "From Geisha to Pack Priestess" Reviews/Comments [ 73 ] |
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Reviewed By: Leanne5582 not signed in On: May 19, 2006 14:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yey! I really like your story! Stupid elders... not wanting them to be together *pouts* stupid grumpy dudes...anyway... the fan thing kicked ass! I wonder who the wrinkly general was... oh well.. please continue!
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Reviewed By: Zelix (Not signed in) On: May 17, 2006 21:27 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story, i've always known you have talent, and when i first reviewed this, i knew this was going to good like the phobia series are... and i was right, this is REALLY good stuff, hope to read more soon. Also, i might not be reviewing with each update, but i'll try. One more thing: when are you going to post the rest of the phobia series here?
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Reviewed By: kaira2828 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2006 22:28 EDT
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KEWL i can't wait
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Reviewed By: GinaCat [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2006 23:42 EDT
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I love this story I hope you update soon I can't wait
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2006 23:15 EDT
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I was very excited when I clicked on this story but the things you copied from the movie were disturbing. I have to agree with tetsuya yamatashi, it was very distracting. I personally couldn't finish the first chapter. I'm a little worried for you because you could be reported for plagiarism just because of that first chapter. If you do change it you should know that not everything in the movie was true. Geisha actually do not sell their virginity. I hope you change it because as an author it would be very upsetting to have all your hard work deleted.
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Reviewed By: quiet_miko On: May 12, 2006 23:09 EDT
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I never saw any of that coming. Hmm..did they ever use the pharse "take a chill pill" at that time period? Anywas, please update! =]
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Reviewed By: joycie On: May 12, 2006 22:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow this story is really awsome i cant wait to read more keep updating!!!!
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Reviewed By: FluffyKirara (not logged in..^^) On: May 12, 2006 20:58 EDT
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wow! i really love it im adding it to my favorets!! i love the style of writting and the whole concept of it... it is just really good!
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Title: more
Reviewed By: serenity101 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2006 19:41 EDT
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We want more. and by more i mean me and my friends. they share my name. It's really good i can't wait until the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Vagabond [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2006 11:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Anotheer Fabulous chapter. You have an excellent style of writing. Very descriptive! Keep it up! I'm looking foward to the next update!
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Title: The poor abused fox
Reviewed By: Kiyasha Hoshi On: May 10, 2006 22:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think you have a very story going here. I'll be watching for the next chapter! ^^
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Reviewed By: hey now On: May 10, 2006 21:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: tetsuya yamatashi (not logged in) On: May 09, 2006 00:32 EDT
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The plot is good, but I just have one suggestion. Just some constructive criticism. In the first chapter when she is talking about how she is water, you may want to change it a wee bit. I read 'Memoirs of a Geisha', and while it is infact differnt, I was completley distracted from the story because I kept on thinking of Memoirs. I don't know if that's only me, but I just feel that it takes away from the actual story. Sorry if I sound like I'm raining on your parade, I'm really not trying to.
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Title: more
Reviewed By: peachgirl1212 On: May 08, 2006 21:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so could I could cry. ya got talent kid. can't wait 4 more. standing ovation.
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Reviewed By: angel_of_hope [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2006 19:36 EDT
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You have got my attention. Keep on going.
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