| "Left Behind" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Reviewed By: chuchulovly On: March 25, 2009 00:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You had a few spelling and grammar mistakes, and the story seemed to jump in places. But none of that hindered my reading of your story. It was great, one of the only fics I've read so far that has captured the characters personalities very well. This story was great and your romance scenes were very steamy. overall great job! You have officially succeeded in making this threesome my new fav Kh pairing!
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Reviewed By: Korune On: October 24, 2006 16:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow... Just read this and I liked it lots! Great job, and loved the pairing! Though... I kinda was expecting a bit more confortation with Xanthus... **shruggs** But I liked the way you put Sephiroth in there. ^_^*
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Reviewed By: mindfreak [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2006 17:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
soooo....when do you plan to write another story like this one? Let me know when you do. Great work.
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Title: Yummy
Reviewed By: PeachLove [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2006 23:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, it certainly wasn't Tenchi Muyo, was it? (hahaa...) I was hoping that Sora would hook up with Cloud, but that ending was equally satisfying, not to mention quite original! Thanks for the great story and congratulations on finishing it! Much love.
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Title: End?
Reviewed By: PeachLove [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2006 21:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
That wasn't the end, was it? He can't love both of them, that's not fair to the petulant little fangirls! You have to make Sora pick one, preferably Cloud, or I will roast your eyeballs over a spit. I will not stand for another Tenchi! Waiting patiently 'til next Friday...
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Title: Sorry, sorry...
Reviewed By: PeachLove [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2006 16:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please forget that whole last review. I feel real smart now that I realise that I reviewed the other KH fic that just updated this last couple days, here for this one. But, look on the bright side! You get another review on your list! Hahaha... myeah... Anyway, I did like this next chapter, although I was holding out for Sephy to try and molest Sora, although then I'd have to feel even worse for poor Sora's dignity and all that, whatever. Don't listen to me, we all see how smart I am. I like the direction that you took and can't wait to see the drama play out. Much love, very sorry...
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Title: New Chapter
Reviewed By: PeachLove [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2006 15:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked the new chapter! Twas full of much yumminess... Although... How come Sora's mom didn't hear them having hot crazy sex? Just wondering. Personally, I just pretended that she was so disturbed by it that she just sat at the kitchen table and fell into denial, like poor crazy, crazy Sephy...
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Reviewed By: Lina The Dramata On: June 19, 2006 15:23 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
I must say this was certainly interesting to read... you chose an interesting route to say the least. A lot of the time when a person is captured by a villain and turned into a slave of such nature, the virtue is taken, they had to do terrible things... I like that you chose that he was able to cause enough discord that he escaped things like having to give the bad guy oral sex. I also loved the the twist of the love triangle. Now the real question is will cloud pull his head out of his ass, will Leon get Sora, or will they learn to share? I will enjoy reading the continuation of this story. Good luck with the rest of the chapters and figuring out where you will be taking this.
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Title: Yes, yes, and yes
Reviewed By: PeachLove [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2006 18:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay~ I love Yuffie, she would fit right in with me. Yes, threesome wanted, but not needed. Yes, love triangle good, no one-night-stands for the Sora. And, Yes, me likey this fanfic!
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Reviewed By: TheBlackPanther [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2006 12:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is actually very good. I'm very happy with it so far. I love Bishie angst. I do believe that you should make it a Leon/Cloud/Sora fic.
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Reviewed By: 29curry On: June 14, 2006 02:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hmmm...i really enjoyed reading this, and i want more!! XD It seem that i didn't saw any grammar and spelling fault,all seem ok to me... but 1 thing did bug me, everything in this fic seems so easy...the way Cloud win over Xanthus, the way Sora take the fact that he must lose his virginity to Cloud so lightly (i imagine he would be so surprised and afraid), and the way you built Aerith's character she seems a little off chara, cause she so easily "OK Cloud we're over" i don't think Aerith is like that, she looked like someone who can endure it a bit and 'then' decide whether she leave or stay. moreover i don't think Aerith would have the heart to leave her friend in this awkward situation and are there anybody who cares about Aerith except Cloud (no one else make contact with her)? ok, but i really like you put those collar thingy on Sora, please torture him more XD .Euh...please forgive me if anything of these offend you in any way...
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Reviewed By: soniab On: May 29, 2006 20:33 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it so far. Look forward to more.
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Reviewed By: amiii On: May 11, 2006 22:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was very intresting. the pairing idea was very good along with the plot. cant wait for the updates.
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Reviewed By: crazyasswhitegirl On: May 08, 2006 21:12 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it. plz keep going you have a great idea, i can't wait to see the next chapter. update as soon as you can.
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Reviewed By: sne3488 On: May 06, 2006 21:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's an interesting concept, and the pairing is one of the rarer pairings of Kingdom Hearts.
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