| "Chobit of the Sand" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: sotobell [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2007 12:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just really loved the plot and it captured my interest right away I really like that line that Akiri says to Gaara, "Those eyes of youres." Please keep on writing this story I want to find out what happens next, how does Akiri do in the tournament? I just really love your fanfic and wish there were more chapters. -annie ^_^
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Title: hurry!!!!
Reviewed By: GaaraLuva [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2007 02:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would have gone even higher on the enjoyment factor if I could have. Please update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: BOO! On: December 12, 2006 22:48 CST
Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed your fanfic but something concerns me is that Akiri is like Gaara sister cause they share the same DNA but it was cute and I enjoyed it anyway.
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: KimenoLytra [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2006 19:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I REALLY loved your story!! I understand that it takes forever to get enough time to write more but it would be awesome if you wrote more! Gaara and Akiri are SUPER cute!!!
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Title: Y'know...
Reviewed By: A Little N-Nuthing On: August 22, 2006 19:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would love you forever if you UPDATED THIIIIIIIISSS!!! *cries quietly* Seriously, I've had this on my fav's foreeeeevvvvvvveeeeeeeeerr and you neeeevvveeeer uuuppppdddaaattteee!!!!!!! Please please please?!!!!
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Reviewed By: BlackDragon_08 On: August 17, 2006 20:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love reading this. It's very interesting and something new. I never thought of reading a Naruto fic with a Chobit twist in it. Akiri is an awesome character too. Pleae you should update this. I would like to know what happen nexts.
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