| "The Price of the Reckless" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: AnsemMesna On: April 24, 2008 04:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I noiced at this site you stopped updating this story after chapeter 2 and stop at chapter 3 for adultfanfiction.net, so why is that? And if you start updating again, can you do more Ansem/Sora lemons and fix it so this site can catch up with the story on adultfanfiction.net? Because I really love this fanfic and think it too great of a story to stop updating and continueing!
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Title: update
Reviewed By: Yaoidreamer [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2006 17:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
God, this was so....cool. God I loved this story so much, you have got to update please, your style is great, and..and... I just can't explain how much I loved this story.
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Title: I LOVE IT
Reviewed By: ILOVEYURI YAOI On: June 24, 2006 13:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Love this story you must update, also you should go to Fanfiction.net make an acount using this name I'll read your story whenever you up date, and on adult fanfiction.net it's an all lemon site but upate really soon. ALSO WRITE A NAMINE KAIRI STORY THOSE ARE ALMOST AS HARD TO FIND
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Reviewed By: OrochiGreel On: June 22, 2006 12:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I REALLY LOVE THE ANSEMxSORA PAIRING AND TO ME THOSE PAIRINGS ARE VERY RARE OH AND ANOTHER THING COULD YOU PLEASE UPDATE BECAUSE I WANT TO READ WHAT HAPPEN IN CHAPTER 3 AND BEYOND
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Title: Yea!
Reviewed By: Sekre SSS On: June 21, 2006 18:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHH!! You have to update!! This story is sooo good, one of the bests I've read ... You should post it on fanfiction net, I'm sure you'll get more reviews there ... though you might get booted cause of the content .... but I have seen more fics stay then go, so yeah. Great job! Please continue! And I think a Riku/Sora thing would be cute (LOVE the ansem/Sora pairing!)
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Reviewed By: Sekre S On: June 15, 2006 18:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHH!! You have to update!! This story is sooo good, one of the bests I've read ... You should post it on fanfiction net, I'm sure you'll get more reviews there ... though you might get booted cause of the content .... but I have seen more fics stay then go, so yeah. Great job! Please continue! And I think a Riku/Sora thing would be cute (LOVE the ansem/Sora pairing!)
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Reviewed By: ayarin On: May 27, 2006 00:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow. This is interesting. I'd love to see what happens to Sora and what's going on with Riku. Ansem amuses me for some reason. Please continue~
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Reviewed By: Yami-mine On: May 24, 2006 00:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I do so love this, It's too bad that I can't read it at work because then I wouldn't ever be bored ::smiles:: But seriously, beloved, keep going, I'm finding that I can't wait for the follow up chapters
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Reviewed By: leanime On: May 10, 2006 18:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is by far the greatest smut I have ever read. You truly are a genious with writing. I hope to see more of your work soon. This story left me breathless and wanting for more. I truly enjoyed it!
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Title: Yami
Reviewed By: GunpowderBlue On: May 09, 2006 12:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hikari, this is one of the best smut stories I've read in quite a long time, I loved the play on Sora ( poor kid ) and the all authoritive Ansem. You did brilliant and I want more.
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