Reviewed By: wizard116(too lazy to sign in) On: May 10, 2006 21:52 CDT Comment/Review: Good idea for the plot. it's a very good first try. you need to look out for capitals and the apostrophies (i suck at spelling) and spacing. go back over this and fix those things. you should always look it over before you post it. and even after you post it cause things can still go up wrong. but it has a good idea. try to take it further next time.
