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| "Kingdom Hearts III: DigiSenshi Hearts" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] | | Pages (2): [ 1 2 › » ] | Title: An idea I had
Reviewed By: Crossoverlover [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2007 15:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey just finished reading the Yugioh capsule chapter and I got to say loved every minute of it. It gave me sort of an idea if you want to hear it. I know your pairing Raye and Mina up with Riku and Izzy, so I began to formulate ideas in my head that might peak your interest. For another thing, I got some ideas for the whole Tai and Seiya traitor thing. I never much liked Seiya anyway due to the fact that even though he knows Serena is taken, he doesn't care. I don't know if these ideas I am about to pass aong to you are where you want to go or not but here goes. What if Seiya were willingly aiding the enemy in order to get Serena for himself while Tai is either branwashed or my real funny idea is to have Myotismon transform into a double of Tai and be the one that aids Seiya in the fight agaisnt the others. While this is going on, Tai who is out cold in his prison cell hears a voice of Sora's mother from the Silver Millennium telling him he has to choose to either watch as Sora and the others are killed or to take up his destiny by Sora's side as Aries Knight or what ever you plan to call the zodic senshi's male counterparts. I was even thinking that with Mina and Amy already paired up unless you all ready have an idea for Lita and Raye you could bring back Nephrite and Jedeite and say they were betrayed by Kunzite and Zoicite. Well theres my ideas I hope you like them, I look forward to your next chapter.
| Reviewed By: Shadow of Miracles [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2007 14:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just finished reading chapter 3, great chapter! it had lots of action and I like the dueling part with Marik and Davis. Its taking me a while to read this story, but its a good one so I'll continue reading it. Anyways update soon. Shadow out...
| Reviewed By: animeraven259 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2007 18:30 CST
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YOur writing is so good! I wish i could write like you!
| Reviewed By: Michi frosty On: January 01, 2007 13:25 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You've created an awesome series, y'know that? Man, I can't believe Seiya and Tai would betray their friends and allies like that(though it's not actually their fault)! Hopefully, our favorite Earth and Moon princes can knock some sense into their stubborn skulls. And now Yami and Tea have the capsule monsters? Yikes! I have a feeling that's going to become invaluable to them in upcoming chapters. And it's good to see that Matt and Jun have finally admitted their feelings toward each other and, *ahem* "consummated" their relationship.(Now if only Riku and Mina would do the same..). And what's this about Sora having a "dark curse?" Could Serenity be referring to Sora's Anti-form? If so, It's probably to make its appearance known, huh? Wonder how the others (especially Kairi) to Anti-Sora; that thing is vicious after all.O_O Well, I hope you update this fic soon. This easily become one of my favorite crossovers and I see massive potential in it.
| Title: 1 more thing
Reviewed By: Aarik Wrath [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2006 01:08 CDT
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i was about to start a story and since you have lots of experience (and i have horrible experience and luck with computer's and im to lazy to check and i have blank flashes where i forget thing's constantly) in the thing (forgot word)it says i cant write a story i have to upload it and i don't know how to do that(like i said no experince or luck) i have great idea's and when i looked for the story types noone's even close so can you give a few tips or somethin also if this isnt alowed delete this if it's not aloud then i don't mind.
| Title: awesome
Reviewed By: Aarik Wrath [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2006 01:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ive been going over your stories for awhile now and all of them (that ive read) are very good but ive noticed that you other then one one-shot have never completed a story not once you get writer's block promise you'll continue and it never get's updated again in fact im predicting that will happen here although i hope not i would hate for this to end up like digidestined of minerva i haven't checked recently but i think it's been 1 or 2 years since its last update but atleast we got this hope you can get the curse of ya!bye.
| Reviewed By: Shadow of Miracles [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2006 17:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've just finish reading chapter two and I really enjoyed it, the fight between Prince Daisuke and Princess Jun against Queen Beryl was really cool. Chapter tree sounds interesting and I like the way that you fuse Sailor Moon, Yugioh and Digimon so that it would fit in the story. I'll try to read the next chapters soon, hopefully you'll update soon. Shadow out... P.S.: By the way I was wondering if you read chapter 11 on my Wolf's Fang story I would really like to know what you think.
| Title: Idear!
Reviewed By: MASmaster On: September 25, 2006 18:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello! It is me again ,just letting you know I love the update, sweetness. Anyways I was hoping you would think about sending them to the Outlaw Star universe, it was one of my favorite animes (And your too from your profile) and I think Melfina seems like the type to be one of the Princesses. Anyways keep up the awesome fic and i'll review again, PEACE!
| Reviewed By: Lizzie Kai On: September 24, 2006 20:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a pretty sweet crossover you have here. I've never read such a huge crossover with so many characters, yet you somehow make it work and efficiently so(with Kingdom Hearts all of things). So, are you going to crossover any other series in this story? Personally, I'd like to see the cast of Bleach and Inuyasha meet the assembled chosen team of heroes.
| Title: kickass dude, kickass
Reviewed By: Axes [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2006 19:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm loving it, loving it. never would of thought of using Salior Moon or digimon. would love to read it, but, all that on one page burns my eyes so i'll take my time with it. it's what i do when i read a good story. anyway, keep it up.
| Reviewed By: Michi frosty On: September 02, 2006 13:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Err! I can't believe my last review cut off like that(stupid site!). Well, I'll make up for it with this new chapter. I liked your idea of turning the Sailor Senshi into Sailor Shinobi(that rocked!) and giving them their own megazord. And I agree that it only makes since that receiving their ninja forms would far surpass the Rangers' given the origin of their powers. Though it seems like each journey they make into another universe is like a double-edged sword(while our heroes are growing increasingly stronger and gaining new allies, their enemies themselves are getting more and more closer to their goal with each prince/princess they take). I'm also completely enomoured with your pairings (Riku/Minako and Izzy/Ami in particular). I find Riku and Mina to be a funny, yet sweet coupling (and I think a happy, energetic girl like her would be good for Riku who sometimes has the tendency to be a little too serious and broody). And Izzy and Ami just click (two geniuses who are rather awkward and shy when it comes to social situations. too cute ^_^V) Anyway, I have a few questions: Are Namine' and Roxas going to make an appearance in your fic(while they have remerged with Sora and Kairi, they're still their own independant entities, and I was wondering if Namine' may know anything about Kairi's past as a princess)? And while I know that Destiny *fixed* Sora's problem with his Anti/Heartless form, can Sora still revert to it?(like if he grews too angry or enraged)? I've also noticed that Sora's powers seem to fluctuate and get stronger whenever Kairi's in danger; I find that very interesting. By the way, I wondering...are you going to include Bleach into your crossover considering they're are similarities between it and Kingdom Hearts that are worth noting like; the Hollows/Heartless, the Zanpukutos/Keyblades, Ichigo and Sora both having a dark side/power in their Hollows/Heartless/Nobodies forms (that and the thought of Aizen working with Maleficent *shudders* scary). Heh-heh, just hoping here since I think that would rule, but I'd be fine with it you didn't include them.^^; Anyway, I have officially become become a fan of this fic, and I can't wait for more. Keep it up!
| Reviewed By: Michi frosty On: August 21, 2006 19:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
God, it's such a long time since I reviewed this thing(since the first chapter in fact! >_
| Reviewed By: SilverWingedAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2006 23:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really loved the new chapter! I especially liked the battle between Davis and Jun against Sephiroth. I can not wait until the next chapter, please update soon **if you didn't already know, Sephiroth's sword is called a Masamune. That is if you are going to be using Sephiroth again in later chapters and I'm hoping you do.
| Reviewed By: Shadow of Miracles [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2006 01:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What's up Gallantmon, great story it was completely amazing. Of course I've only read chapter one, but nonetheless it was a really great start. Its hasn't even been half a year since I've played all the Kingdom Hearts game, I beat the first one with everything complete and I beat Kingdom hearts and now I'm trying to unlock the secret ending that shows Kingdom Hearts 3, anyways my point is that all the characters are in place and the whole KH2 storyline combine with the sailor moon storyline was really great. Also I really like that you brought back Daemon, he's my favorite evil digimon of all times since he was the only one to not be defeated. Anyways, I'll be reviewing again as soon as I'm done with the rest of the chapters, I'm looking forward to some Daikari and Sora/Kairi. Until next time. Shadow out...
| Reviewed By: MASmaster On: July 11, 2006 17:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was mentioned!... sorta... anyways great update man, can't wait for then next one, PEACE!
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