| "...then along comes destiny..." Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: gcdv [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2006 22:54 CDT
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OOOOOO! She made it cold, there would have been a problem if that were me. I hate the cold, I would have started to boxing that lil matha***** lol. UPdate soon pleezy weezy
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Reviewed By: toasterwoman360 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2006 23:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: nightangel15 not logged in On: May 13, 2006 10:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
for a beginning, it looks like this is gonna be a pretty good story. please update soon
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Reviewed By: mervy On: May 12, 2006 09:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
Cant say much for one chapter...Dont tell me Kagome is some kind of demon or weather godess. I like her as human better. It was good though.
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