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| "The Gamble" Reviews/Comments [ 32 ] | | Pages (3): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 ] | Title: xxSilentBeautyxx@hotmail.com
Reviewed By: Seiai(NSI) On: May 12, 2006 10:46 EDT
Comment/Review:
great start! i cant wait to see where your going with this and what happens. its really drawing me in.
| Reviewed By: ObtuseNeneko [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2006 08:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah, it was good. I really liked it. At first it made me laugh because of the attitude. Then the story started moving and I was like 'Damn, what happens?' Yeah I thought about it for a minute. 'Okay, kill them.' I wish you luck with future chapters that you put any effort into writing. Keep it up and I will keep reading! ;)
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