| "Spider Bite" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Reviewed By: rinsama---15 On: August 15, 2007 11:59 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohhhh! Kagome's been a bad girl. Sneaky Sneaky. LOL Anyway great job as usual.
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Reviewed By: nelson bannaba On: October 25, 2006 12:13 CDT
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Can't believe I waited so long to read this - it was so freaking sexy! :) I adored the part where Kagome was commanding Inu to 'do it'. Poor Inuyasha, he's not filthy - though we wouldn't mind it if his mind was in the gutter, haha.
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Reviewed By: Anime Lady PIMP [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2006 21:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HA this is the second time I read this! LOL
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Reviewed By: Dark Avenger [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2006 20:18 CDT
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Your story has won an award from the Feudal Association! Your award can be found here - http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/aug2006awards/Best-Lemon-1st.jpg The Feudal Association is a group that presents awards to fanfiction and fanart in the InuYasha Fandom several times a year. Our official website can be found here - http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/ And our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs can be found here - http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~ The Daimyo Owner of the Feudal Association
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Title: ...OMI!!!!!
Reviewed By: Jalen a.k.a. Witchlit On: July 31, 2006 16:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*tear tear* *sniff sniff* OMI!! (oh my Inuyasha) that made me wanna cry how he called HIMSELF a filthy Hanyou...i just wanted 2 give him a HUGE hug...i luv him so much and ^_^ yea hes so sexi....but oh n\e i have read ALOT of ur fanfics and u are an AMAZING writer...keep up tha awesome work...*sniff sniff* (still) Kagome bes treat him good or ima kick her ass lol..j\p..i quess i should stop now..ok ...im done..bye...ok im done..and...NOW!....
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Reviewed By: Bre`Auna Kemp ( Tanaga Mannie_bre) On: July 24, 2006 02:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it so sexy and cute .he would do any thing i wonder if her would do that for me hmmmmmmmmm! lol i'm jus joking but i still loved it really sexy.
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Title: Score!
Reviewed By: BrownRecluse(not logged on) On: July 04, 2006 10:46 CDT
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Major pointage for use of womanly wiles on unsuspecting (and possibly filthy) hanyous! This was just too funny! Well done!
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Reviewed By: bigbluemonkey555 On: May 31, 2006 23:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, that was an awesome lemon, probably one of the best pure sex fics ive read, but you manage to weave the story into it so smoothly, really quite amazing. Also, a suprisingly original plot to this one shot, and not the same old same old hot springs blah blah stuff that seems to keep popping up everywhere. I Really commend you on your writing style as well, and you detail the lemon so perfectly. Great fic, i plan to read more of your works. Keep up the great job. Chapter 2 maybe? I would be interested to see the aftermath with Kikyo etc etc.
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Reviewed By: Laurell-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2006 14:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh wow that was such a great story!!! You wrote it perfectly and it was a great mix of sweet and sexy. I really loved it, overall YUM!
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Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2006 16:23 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A very sexy story. A whole new level of EXTREME HOTNESS! ~later~
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Reviewed By: moshi moshi On: May 23, 2006 01:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was one really good lemon that you wrote not only that but was a odd way to get them together never seen that one before.
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Reviewed By: axel721 On: May 17, 2006 05:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
haha this one is cute^^ 'gome is rather evil isnt she ._. i love this fic ^^ a sequel would be great! your style is awesome ^^b
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Reviewed By: Angel_of_Elements [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2006 18:09 CDT
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Wow, thats one of the few BEST hentai one-shots I ever read.
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Title: cool
Reviewed By: fawn of the woods (not logged in) On: May 13, 2006 16:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is cool good one-shot, keep going with your other fics i'm keeping up with them all, you're a great writer
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Reviewed By: bluezinthos (nsi) On: May 13, 2006 12:15 CDT
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i know, not signed in, i'm bad. i re-read this here(obviously) and i'm just amazed at how well you can keep those two in character when leading them to things we all wish would happen. yasha tries to do the right thing for both women and ends up hurting kagome and himslef more then anything. i wonder if kikyou really cares in the same way? beautifully written! i'll look forward to anyother one shot ideas you may have floating around!
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