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Title: Score!
Reviewed By: BrownRecluse(not logged on) On: July 04, 2006 10:46 CDT
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Major pointage for use of womanly wiles on unsuspecting (and possibly filthy) hanyous! This was just too funny! Well done!
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Reviewed By: bigbluemonkey555 On: May 31, 2006 23:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, that was an awesome lemon, probably one of the best pure sex fics ive read, but you manage to weave the story into it so smoothly, really quite amazing. Also, a suprisingly original plot to this one shot, and not the same old same old hot springs blah blah stuff that seems to keep popping up everywhere. I Really commend you on your writing style as well, and you detail the lemon so perfectly. Great fic, i plan to read more of your works. Keep up the great job. Chapter 2 maybe? I would be interested to see the aftermath with Kikyo etc etc.
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Reviewed By: Laurell-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2006 14:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh wow that was such a great story!!! You wrote it perfectly and it was a great mix of sweet and sexy. I really loved it, overall YUM!
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Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2006 16:23 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A very sexy story. A whole new level of EXTREME HOTNESS! ~later~
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Reviewed By: moshi moshi On: May 23, 2006 01:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was one really good lemon that you wrote not only that but was a odd way to get them together never seen that one before.
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Reviewed By: axel721 On: May 17, 2006 05:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
haha this one is cute^^ 'gome is rather evil isnt she ._. i love this fic ^^ a sequel would be great! your style is awesome ^^b
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Reviewed By: Angel_of_Elements [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2006 18:09 CDT
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Wow, thats one of the few BEST hentai one-shots I ever read.
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Title: cool
Reviewed By: fawn of the woods (not logged in) On: May 13, 2006 16:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is cool good one-shot, keep going with your other fics i'm keeping up with them all, you're a great writer
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Reviewed By: bluezinthos (nsi) On: May 13, 2006 12:15 CDT
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i know, not signed in, i'm bad. i re-read this here(obviously) and i'm just amazed at how well you can keep those two in character when leading them to things we all wish would happen. yasha tries to do the right thing for both women and ends up hurting kagome and himslef more then anything. i wonder if kikyou really cares in the same way? beautifully written! i'll look forward to anyother one shot ideas you may have floating around!
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Reviewed By: Danny Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2006 20:42 CDT
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I like it, this is a great story.
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Reviewed By: MonoKani On: May 12, 2006 20:38 CDT
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Loved it... It was a bit cheesey with all the "I'm only a dirty Hanyou" crap, but other than that, it was great!
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Reviewed By: the bastard child On: May 12, 2006 19:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwww... so good! i couldn't stop reading! i love it. good idea on kagome's part, even if it is a little obvious what she wanted... at least to anyone with half a brain. poor stupid inuyasha. haha, i love it.
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Reviewed By: Akihana nsi On: May 12, 2006 18:03 CDT
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Very good. I think I was expecting the spider bite reference to refer to Naraku, but it was pleasantly suprising that it wasn't. It was a beautiful lemon. The ending was really satisfying. I hope to see a new chapter of Awakenings soon.
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Reviewed By: BiggestInuyashaFANever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2006 17:21 CDT
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Absoloutly the best Inu/Kag lemon story i have ever had the plesure of reading( don't take that the wrong way) you rock! You are an awsome writer and you write amazing lemons. Is there anything you can't do?
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Reviewed By: GinaCat [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2006 17:11 CDT
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That was awesome you are such a great writer YOU ROCK
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