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"Ranma the Pimp Master" Reviews/Comments [ 1 ]
 Reviewed By: Vilkath [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 25, 2007 00:28 CDT
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I think this is pretty much trash, first you build up a 'ranma' to super fanon levels for almost no real reason, make him irrestible, sexy, talented, not to mention totaly full of himself. Then not a few paragraphs later he meets 'the perfect girl' who can magicaly resist his attempts to woo her, naturaly and unaturaly. Her boyfriend happens to be some super cyborg who, despite his extra weight and mass is both faster and stronger then Ranma. I think this fic is one the best examples of what happens when two 'perfect' characters meet up. This should of been called "When Gary-Stu met Mary Sue."

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