| "Sedition of Will" Reviews/Comments [ 41 ] |
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Reviewed By: Pink Ninja On: May 28, 2006 22:50 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
.... I love you.... okay okay... I love your writing! I am super excited for chapter 10! Anything that brings out several emotions is sure to be a success. I'm glad that she was aged older... had me worried in the beggining. I congratulate your skilledness. hah.. Keep on writing.. even if you keep me and others waiting i will always check back to check for updates.. Sheesh you rock! lots of encouragement - The Pink Ninja
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Reviewed By: marithez On: May 25, 2006 03:55 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
why not post it to fanfiction.net??? im sure lot of readers out there will love your work...
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Title: I like it
Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2006 18:29 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story keep it coming!
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Reviewed By: New Fan On: May 23, 2006 17:59 PDT
Comment/Review:
I read all nine chapters and I really enjoyed the story.Update soon
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Title: Perfect!!
Reviewed By: Angel_fanficluva [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2006 06:42 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am seriously obsessed with this story!! I love your constant updates!! I hope Kagura won't make too many problems:( Anyways a little angst never hurt anyone:) I love ur story and update soon!
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Reviewed By: marithez On: May 22, 2006 04:02 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE IT!!! LOVE IT!!!! LOVE IT!!!
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Title: Kami-sama
Reviewed By: Odi et amo [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2006 22:43 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am now officially obsessed with this fic. I laughed so hard when Rin was caught in the spring by Sesshomaru. I hope you continue this fic, it's quite excellent!!!
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Reviewed By: Morwen Re On: May 21, 2006 19:44 PDT
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good job! i can't wait to read more! you've kept all the characters in line and have written a very intresting fic with a great plot line! please update again soon! i'll give you a cookie if you do!
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Title: ch. 8
Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: May 21, 2006 18:48 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Boy! This story is moving at a really good pace. You can not beat having regular updates, either. I feel spoiled. Good chapter. Cynbad146
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Reviewed By: ChibiRin (0ffline) On: May 21, 2006 12:27 PDT
Comment/Review:
Oh goodness! Where did Rin go? I hope Sesshoumaru comes to his senses soon and realizes Rin is a good match. I like you story and hope that you continue soon. Good luck!
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Title: Great!
Reviewed By: Angel_fanficluva [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2006 04:53 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
okay...you're story just keeps getting better and better!! I LOVE IT!! please update soon!!I mean relli soon!!
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Title: Ch.s 6 and 7
Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: May 20, 2006 23:53 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story just keeps getting better and better. Travel time with a "close" moment. Myoga pops in and drops his little time bomb;Sesshoumaru an uncle?! The pool scene sounded so beautiful and serene. Then a little bit of a history lesson on bitterness101. The best part was last. The intimate scene in the middle of the night. You threw in a little angst and a cliffhanger at the end when Sesshoumaru got cold feet. The story is cooking now and I am really hooked. I strongly suspect that you are not a novice at this writing thing. Have we read you before under a differ name? Regardless, it was great. Cynbad146
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Reviewed By: Alena [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2006 17:40 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thoroughly enjoy Sess/Rin fics that keep them in character! When Sesshoumaru is tooo eager it makes it seem very childish and false. You're doing a great job! Update soon, you have me glued to my chair!
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Title: GREAT!!!!
Reviewed By: marithez On: May 20, 2006 16:23 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
one of the best sessrin fanfiction work ever!!! i just hope people would review more...i know lot of people out there appreciate work like this...pls review!!! keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: AWESOME On: May 20, 2006 15:23 PDT
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yes I do keep on reviewing because this is the greatest story ever!!! Thanks for the update! keep it coming
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